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Rookie_Draconian4mthReplied to Rajeshwaran_RCh 344 Written Off- Rookie_Draconian4mthCommentedCh 343 A Resourceful Gambler
- Rookie_Draconian4mthReplied to Tempest_5916
"Taste of a demoness ain't bad." — Emperor Rosell
If he were to ever lose the fight against the Boar King, Inala would switch to his female form and seek refuge. His goal at present would be to appeal to the Boar King and fully register in the latter's mind as a harmless, pitiful Free Human woman who only wished to paint and live the rest of her life. - Rookie_Draconian4mthCommented
well... all 7 of you are... so yeah...
Only after Wittral left did he come to a realisation, 'I'm a fucking piece of shit!' - Rookie_Draconian4mthCommented
[Dissociation Commences...]
Immediately after, his face scrunched up, 'No, she's the reason I have to suffer like this.' - Rookie_Draconian4mthCommented
oof
He stared blankly, unable to process everything he had heard. Slowly, a smile formed on his face, 'She likes me.' - Rookie_Draconian4mthPosted
Posting the review at chapter 189. There are obviously minute spoilers mixed in below, so read at your own risk. World Building: Superb, the component of the story that I love the most. From the lore to power system to mysterious nature of the world to the outer world to the surface to the tribes to the history. Every-damn-thing. I love it. There are no info dumps (tho I'm immune to them, courtesy of The Legendary Mechanic) Though I'm eager to understand more about the world, hopefully Inala roams the world more, what lies beyond Sumatra continent? What are the deep seas like? Could there be Clansmen living inside oceans, merfolk perhaps? Inside Volcanos? Power System: There's no doubt power system holds solid second place in my heart about the story, even in that segment, the Natures. Something inherent to a creature, significant to its existence, Primary, Secondary, Tertiary. Not too much, not too little. With there being multiple ways to gain them, experiment! Then the division of human populace, Free, Ravaged, Clansmen. My personal favourite are ofcourse clansmen (only when I'm the one having them as my immune system, I don't want any brainwashing). But I feel like Free humans are being shown way below their potential, they have the potential to match the clansmen, but I also feel there are a couple holes here, for one, they form their bodies with inanimate objects, which inherently has no lifeforce, so they shouldn't possibly have increased lifespan, at all (it's a different matter altogether it you say that each life of Life Stage adds the maximum amount of a human's lifespan to the remaining, which wud be absurd) and also theSpirit, Body, Life, Transcendence. There's not much to say about that, typical cultivation jagron, tho I was hopeful of the Transcendent stage being a representation of a concept, making the person virtually immortal (not unkillable, just not killable by aging). The ranks, Iron, Silver, Gold, Mystic. Now that's the interesting bit, Iron Silver are nothing to write home about, but Gold, oh Gold, is great, but that's it. Mystic is super grand great, and apparently every continent has one race blessed by it, hence every continent has atleast one blessed race at all times, the continents are "aware", hence sentient to an extent (reminds me of Lore and Telltale combo governing the Dream World). And to turn Mystic, you need to fulfil requirements, makes sense, and the intermingling prefix of Empyrean, I suppose attaining that status at Gold rank evolution is a prerequisite for Mystic? (Tho I doubt)Story: Again, excellent. Plot twists after plot twists, nice. There were a couple points where I felt uncomfortable, for example, Gannala flashback arc felt forced, and rushed (tho I understand many would have dropped if it wasn't rushed). Story: What I liked the most in the story is that the world moves on regardless of whatever anyone is doing, no one is important (not important enuf, not yet) and then there are the remaining 4 "Fortutous Encounters" remaining (I suppose Attribute has already been claimed at the latest point of the story) Plus I still think the end boss is Renduldu. Character development: Obviously great. There is enuf material to go around that psychology can be used to understand each one's thought process, plus it's great that you can make me hate (Oyo, Virala, etc) or root for a character (Inala, Grehha, Orakha, etc)
- Rookie_Draconian9mthReplied to Kw0z
I know five languages. Two of them are programming ones. What about you, oh fine gentleman?
Though, as he would find out later, he would not be so powerless after all. - Rookie_Draconian9mthCommented
I swear if he sells them...
More loot! This was a windfall! - Rookie_Draconian9mthCommented
oof
{S class Inheritance item} - Rookie_Draconian9mthCommented
i mean... he's still alive anyways... so...
[-126 662!] - Rookie_Draconian9mthCommented
Art! Is an EXPLOSION!
"Deadra!" spoke an ancient! Unholy, deep and savage voice! It was devoid of emotions! Yet still, it spoke with cruelty beyond human comprehension! It was but a word that made everyone shudder. - Rookie_Draconian9mthReplied to legendary_awesome
...why is its factorial important again?
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"Three skulled monster"...wither?
He was but level 25. And the Lesser Death Knight was a three skulled Monster. And is already classed as a Savage tier monster. Which is too much for the current Dave. However, that didn't stop him from assisting the two bullies. - Rookie_Draconian9mthReplied to Shippudenisthebest
THE STRONGEST caped baldy
So, running and weight lifting can increase stamina… this sounds logical, but what if I do both then? - Rookie_Draconian9mthReplied to AnimeFan_OG
ah how i miss the Anti-Undies-Squad.
"Oh, fresh blood, you must be one of those Adventurers, right? I have seen many of you. Truth be told I am envious of your ability to revive even after you die, still, that does not make you invincible. Ahh, I guess you want to learn the basic skills and train, right?" Dave was a bit stunned, not at the man but the way he spoke and the expressions he had on his face. Though he was but an artificial character, he displayed envy and even gave advice to Dave. This was for him a first, how can a fictional character display human emotion? Dave could only praise the work behind such a game. Perhaps this is a reason why people are hooked on Conquest. - Rookie_Draconian9mthReplied to Frost_Elemental
TLM fan here eh, nice to make your acquaintance.
These high tier monsters would require thousands of players to fight against and even if they defeat them, the chances of the territory attack conquest to drop are abysmally small. To the extent that ever since the release of Conquest, only three of such items were found. With these items, in the hands of the top-rated guilds, the three major kingdoms have been conquered. - Rookie_Draconian9mthReplied to Mr_Fuzzknuckle
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For a slow moment he flew peacefully. Then he slammed into the asphalt, tumbling and sliding for longer than he remained conscious. - Rookie_Draconian9mthReplied to Narushiki
no one cares about ur dad, don't cry about ur personal matters here in the comment section.
"What kind of mess did my father drag me into?" - Rookie_Draconian9mthReplied to IWriteForFun
it's not that rare, just that the fatherless figures are too common online (more so than those with fathers) that it gives the impression that good fathers are a rarity
That was okay. His father Ryncol supported him all the way through. He even spent much of his time gathering the capital to kick start his son's business.