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You know, I'm Brazilian, I don't speak or read English, but I use Google translate to read these stories and yours is really very good. While I was looking for songs on YouTube about flash or things like that, I ended up finding this one, it's a Brazilian song I hope it can inspire you to create your character. Fast to the point where I feel like the world around me is spinning slower I use speed to do what is right above all else 'Cause now I'm the fastest man in the world To revive Superman I needed to run through time And pass the energy from my body to the box And when he woke up he didn't remember anyone else We are not his enemies, he has become a threat A Kryptonian released into the world We've seen what he can do Turn the world to ashes No matter how fast I run, he keeps up with me Superhuman vision, insane speed in slow motion I will save these lives I run to escape the past (run, Barry, run!) When you see a flash It is the acceleration force My mother, murdered My father, arrested for nothing But no one can escape the pain A ray that hit me Turned me into Flash The fastest man in the world Yeah... Yeah... 7 Minutoz, Sidney Scaccio on the beats, NERD HITS Source: Musixmatch Composers: Gabriel Rodrigues / Scaccio Scaccio
Wow, your story is really really cool I'm really enjoying it I just hope it doesn't have a Harem And that you keep keeping the pace a little slow it's not cool to rush things too much even if it's a story about the flash if you rush things it will get really bad Take it slow build the world at your pace.
Dear the author, I'm loving the rhythm of the story, how you're building everything, it's really really cool. It even seems like you're the creator of the story out of nowhere, it appears. It's not a fanfiction, but rather that you're creating the story exactly completely out of nothing, really, okay? incredible and I'm loving it now people are saying that I don't know the pace is too slow Oh I want these people to explode more I don't want you to change it's really really cool it's incredible now it counts the amount of the protagonist's normal farm I think It's cool, no explanation needed, other characters from the Naruto series also have a large amount of tea. Not to mention that there is that scar on his body before the protagonist was reincarnated and entered the Tacoma's body, he already had scars so who knows, he may have had experiences that gave this huge amount of chakra
Dear the author, one of the only criticisms I have about the story is to define in which language they are talking like when they are alone they are speaking in their native language or they are speaking in the native language of Westeros.
You said that you want to choose a setting for the new stories, I understand that you don't want to interfere with the script with the future and I think that's really cool, so why don't you make him one of the Twelve Ninja Guardians, the group responsible for protecting the Daimyō of the Land of Fire.
Hi, I don't know English so I'm using Google Translate I just wanted to say that you send this story the way you're writing it slowly Take it easy and it's really cool I'm loving it and I want to keep listening to the stories about this character that I'm loving really I just wanted him to learn the art of the sword soon