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Is he seriously telling everyone who/what he is…?! That's really dumb, like no mask or secrecy when he is investigating… Like the map thing he did it in front of the boy mother, that's stupid cause when he got there in the Marvel world he did hide, but now he will be so easy to be found. Plus, if he tells everyone then it's not really interesting because there is no suspense about his character etc…
His mother is a fashion designer, no? So his father might already know his measurement.
Nah, I really don't like harem fanfics I don't find it interesting and the fact that just one girl or boy is not enough for someone to settle down with. I mean, I know the story in itself could be very good, but it's something I really just can't find myself drawn to read when I know that as story often are romance is a big part of it later on and yeah no. Hope the next story you write will not be a harem story.
I REALLY wanted to read that story, but I really don't like Harem stories…😢😢😢
Please please please Not a Harem fanfic! Pleaseeee
I Loveeee It!!! Please update soon...!!! <3
Is it between Penny and another character ?
I love your story but, please tell me it's not a harem fanfic? If it is, there is no tag to indicate, so you should put one, because I would have not read your story… I just hate Harem stories or poly stories.
I loveee your story!!! <3 But, Please tell me it's not an Harem story? I hate them and there wasn't any tag if it is one... ;(
Pleaseeee!!! Don't make it a poly story!
Please don't make him a villain!!! Please, it will ruin everything... I'm all for him not being a goody two shoes and be more harsh, but not for him to be a villain. Please! I really love your story and wish to continue reading it!
So it's a Harem story? Hugh, sorry I'm out… Hate poly/harem stories!
Can you please make the chapters longer? Please! It's just that it's kind of boring/annoying when the chapters are read so fast…(please don't take it badly or as a mean comment). It's just I really love your story, and sometimes it takes you time to update, but then the chapter are short, so I get frustrated LoL!
Personally, I think that he is somewhat evil… After all, he did send Harry to live with abusive people and even when Harry did pretty much beg him to stay at Hogwarts, he still sent him back to his abusive relative. He did the same with Tom Riddle when Tom had asked to stay in Hogwarts because of the muggle war, as well as how the matron was abusive towards him. With all the exorcism rituals and other abuse he had to live with if I'm not wrong. It's like he can't learn from his mistakes first with Tom, then Severus with his father and the bully of the marauders and then Harry!!! Like seriously, can he not learn his lessons from all his mistakes.! Oh, and then there is the whole situation with Grindelwald and his Sister… Like Really! So yeah to me, He is a big f*ck**g Manipulative old goat and like to think of himself as someone who knows best and use everyone to achieve his goals at everyone expense. Like he didn't know Sirius was the godfather to harry or that he didn't have a trial for that matter with him being the Chef of whatever the name is… And then there is the whole thing about the prophecy like who would conduct a job interview at a pub, in wartime and then have those who are affected by the war go and live in the muggle world instead of the Potter manor where there is probably already a lot of wards and just add the fidelius charm and be the secret keeper. Some might say that it's because Voldi would target him, but let's not forget that he is very powerful and that Tom is pretty much or at least a little scared of him. And the fact that putting Peter Pettigrew was downright stupid even if he didn't betray them, as he would have been an easy target with him not being very powerful!
Well as long as it's not a poly/harem story I'm all IN…
Wish it was Edward or Jasper… But if I had to chose between them, it would be Kate. Rose and Emmett are just too cute/good together.
Personally, I think that he is somewhat evil… After all, he did send Harry to live with abusive people and even when Harry did pretty much beg him to stay at Hogwarts, he still sent him back to his abusive relative. He did the same with Tom Riddle when Tom had asked to stay in Hogwarts because of the muggle war, as well as how the matron was abusive towards him. With all the exorcism rituals and other abuse he had to live with if I'm not wrong. It's like he can't learn from his mistakes first with Tom, then Severus with his father and the bully of the marauders and then Harry!!! Like seriously, can he not learn his lessons from all his mistakes.! Oh, and then there is the whole situation with Grindelwald and his Sister… Like Really! So yeah to me, He is a big f*ck**g Manipulative old goat and like to think of himself as someone who knows best and use everyone to achieve his goals at everyone expense. Like he didn't know Sirius was the godfather to harry or that he didn't have a trial for that matter with him being the Chef of whatever the name is… And then there is the whole thing about the prophecy like who would conduct a job interview at a pub, in wartime and then have those who are affected by the war go and live in the muggle world instead of the Potter manor where there is probably already a lot of wards and just add the fidelius charm and be the secret keeper. Some might say that it's because Voldi would target him, but let's not forget that he is very powerful and that Tom is pretty much or at least a little scared of him. And the fact that putting Peter Pettigrew was downright stupid even if he didn't betray them, as he would have been an easy target with him not being very powerful!
Was going to say the same things.
I hope it's not going to be really fast passed, please…
Wish the chapters were longer... Kind of boring to read the chapters so fast. But I love your story!!! <3<3<3