I don't remember her killing anyone so far? Almost everyone she has a feud with escapes. The ML was the one who killed that skank in the beginning only because she was going to tell the FL's secrets.

I agree. The author made the FL stupid AF. I know that a lot of authors use the MC's lack of knowledge as a way to inform the readers/world build but in this story she is really stupid about things that can be guessed through common sense. She always says she will work hard but she never does. She just floats along being carried by the ML. Her middle name should be- "Huh, I don't get it." I wish someone would spoil us on where she comes from and what happened with her mother and father. That's really the only reason I am reading this.

She let the ML have all the meat. This author is really rambling and erratic. The ML wants the FL to cook for him but he hasn't approached her yet. Who knows if the author will remember what she wrote before.

So she magically has fish in her space? I guess the author forgot that she almost drowned when she was fishing and had to be grabbed out of the water before she caught any fish? Every author wants to write this type of farming story but no one puts in any effort.

I think a better name for her would be wino or lush.

Where the f is the aunt? Why would she put her in the space and let her know that she has one? I really hope this starts making sense soon.

Yes such an amazing "Hey you look up."

Dear lord this story is all over the place.

I've given up looking for story consistency and cohesion. I have to turn my brain off in order to read this.

hahaha Plus the thread for sewing her stitches and where's the twin baby girl? I try not to nitpick but yeesh do these authors reread their stories to make sure that they make sense?

I was wondering this also. The author seems to have forgotten about the girl baby.

I don't recommend this if you want a smart strong FL. The FL is dumb AF all in the name of us learning about the world, but seriously author do you feel that all of your readers are as stupid as your FL? The author spells out each and every speck of the world information even if it's so obvious it could slap our faces through the monitor. The author makes the MCs brainless just to make some drama. For example there is an emperor that has constantly challenged the ML and FL. When he is finally getting ready to die he makes one last request to see the ML. The ML treats him as a fly and goes to see him knowing that it's a trap. He gets trapped by a spirit binding artifact chess board while assassins are sent to kill the FL. The supposedly small fry enemies end up coming back again and again getting worse each time. For example there is a succubus female character that tries to give the ML aphrodisiac because she wants the ML but they figured it out before hand but still let her go without ANY punishment. This has happened with EVERY.SINGLE.ENEMY so far! They have only killed 2 enemies out of the probably 15 or 20 enemies they have. I've read 420 chapters before I dropped it. I wanted to last until she killed the scumbags from her last life but I can't hang. I'd rather read a story with a smart, hard working, and domineering FL. Also so far this FL has barely worked on her cultivation. What get stronger? I'm really disappointed because so many of these stories start off great but then the characters or plot just take a dive into the toilet.

This story could have been good but as some of the others have said this author dragged out any and all interactions with the antagonists and the flow of the action scenes are complete shit. The author has you read about random shit thoughts from almost EVERY.SINGLE.PERSON involved in the fight each time. That made the action/interactions so boring. It takes 10 chapters of internal and external dialogue to get to the actual fighting. If you read this story I recommend that you be open to skimming otherwise I don't recommend it.

You must not have read very many stories in this genre then? It's pretty typical. She just gets goldfingers that aren't typically paired together. That's the only unique part.

As far as I remember she doesn't have food in it other then what she can plant and grow so far.

Men like adult women that act like little girls? Did I miss something or is this an asian thing?

You've got your work cut out for you if you are going to be this story's editor.

hahaha Dont' sweat the small stuff bruh! Otherwise with this story you will lose your mind.

Yes so much word padding or maybe the author thinks that we aren't too bright and need things repeated constantly because we don't remember?

IKR. She hasn't washed herself either after having a fever for a few days.