you could switch characters as you want, i love we dont get mineta at all, he always felt like an useless adition, theres always the option you could swap the clases seats as you feel would work more in favor of your FF

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thanks for the chap, as for recomendations for fight scenes, im no writer so i dont know the dificulties but have had fun reading them so i may have an idea of how to give advice, maybe you could put more focus on the actions, ir you could go ballistic with all details, but i would recomend a little bit of both, focus on simple movements when neded, and explain with more complex ones, tough balance would be sometimes hard to get you are doing a good job, maybe read some action focused fanfics to help yourself give more of an idea how you want it to look, hope this helps you

thanks for the chapter, bear with my english please, the history is great and fun to read, to be honest i loved the first appeareance of reaper, it was epic for me, the part where he becomes like a kid was somewhat shocking but would rather he keep the reaper demeanor more, props for making him more human, for the rest of the cast it seems well, tough i could point you give them a little more light to them as a manner to connect to them could make their deaths more meaning full for us, is my tip, may it be helpfull

mha vs covenant from halo, midoriya still with ofa just during the fight against shigaraki, the covenant pop into picture with a portal, that could be fun

thanks for the chapter, as for magic you could go by tohru base magic or a mix of her mother quirk and magic, it could work as a good concept if you like the idea

i found this story in FF been reading it for a while, im on ch36 as far as i got its a good story so far so i recomend it a lot, hopefully they finish it here, as far as i know they stoped posting it on FF and i would love to read the whole story, please its really good

first lets break down the story with the basics then my personal opinion writing quality: could use some work but every story does that doesnt get a proper book will happen to it so, its not someting new here, you can make sense of what is being said. updates until i believe is the end of the book on ch113 since theres no been updates as of this date, it was steady and good story development i give it a 1.5/2*, the hole concept was great even i couldnt help but wanting more on the first chapter, tough gacha and clasic cliches where there not a problem, then it happen, story progresion was sent trough the window, hey you want an op mech at the begining, you got it, you want a history with basically little to no rough spots for development, here we go, love interest? so sudden and forced feeling that give the sense of not being developed, plot? clasic mc goes op and conquers universe in a mere 113 chapters that even the enemies feel like, "was it always this easy to get (s rank mech?, give life to mech?, make combiners/megazords?; zoids? or even gurren lagan lvl mech?)" the answer the story gives is yes and the fights last like 1 up to 3 chapters, easy to read and have a laugh yes, good story? i would say in middle of yes and no, for the points before. characters: barely any important characters where introduced, some even forgothen by the middle and little to none character development outside of main cast that is a small number to begin with. world background: now this is why yes, the world is someting it could at the bery least story book lvl, heck if writed right it could even become a great hit to become a small series/cartoon/manga/weebtoon. why? how many stories tread at the concep of creating mechs in a society where everyone can, world danger lvl extintion or survival, reaching up to the stars? not many but has the potential. final toughts: my rating would be 3* but 3.2 its good enough, worth your time? yes if you just want to read someting to pass time, story wise not as much, feel like someting i would read again just for killing time, finally the concept is really good and i love it, custom making is a 5* in my book but the "lets make a gundam like freedoom" is what i feel somewhat sad, no exploration trough the other universes to add to them and mash them up, no tecnology studiying o mix and match to create someting new and lastly no new mech concept that hasnt been touched before. recomendation if you are interested in a history similar but more trough it would be infinite machine war, has 1k+ chapts with similar concept but longer story

since we are talking cyberpunk, you could go with the knowledge of some sfci like star wars, titanfall or gundam, any of these can be a really impresive, or you could go with power, in that case someting along the lines of magneto could be op since everyone has cibernetics, solo lveling power could do the trick since is basically a war world or tecnomancer like the one in marvel, the girl from japan that can attach to herself machines and program them how she likes i believe is her power, been a while since last read a marvel comic to be honest, hope these can give some form of inspiration

the history is well built, the characters are well played, the development is quite rush, i understand the dangers and dificulties the prot has to go trough but too op around middle is boring at this point, for backgrounds are really good, you can see thery react mostly like the characters on their worlds, now the bad, tough is really interesting theres too much development on the mc world, i can understand his goals and the why but i cant go on, i ended skiping between quest because i got bored out of my mind by the downtime, still good story but yea, the downtime can be a little too much for some people, also is good to have world buildind