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Great chapter, but I have a few questions and suggestions. Can Shikigami use chakra techniques? After all, they are summoning creatures, that is, they can use techniques from chakra. That is, Nue can use lightning elemental techniques, or divine dogs can use chakra to walk on water and trees, or the same techniques of the Inazuka clan. If this is possible, then in fact the rabbit will easily have to use the transformation technique, instead of painting the original every time. But the condition for this must be that all these techniques can be used by the main character. that is, the result is an equivalent exchange, Akira can use Shikigami techniques, and Shikigami can use their owner’s techniques. Although the question remains the same, are you using this idea? or did you already think of it yourself and planned to introduce it into the plot?
The fanfic is too naive, I write that Konoha is very bad, and the village hidden in the clouds is good and generally loves and respects its comrades, although this is complete nonsense. I’m generally silent about how the main character was allowed into the village and easily became attached to Yugito. The only good thing about this is Matatabi's character and actions
author, have you read the manga black clover? if yes, then I'm sure you know about a character named Nacht Faust. He had shadow magic and also had a contract with the devil, merging with demons, he acquired new properties of his shadow, such as a unique ability and armor personifying a demon. In jjk we have long been given to understand that shikigami can be fused with each other, and Sukuna has proven that he can use shikigami techniques without calling them, so perhaps you can introduce into your work the ability to merge with your shikigami to make the main character stronger and give him the opportunity to stand with the other strongest of the shinobi world. I also wanted to talk about the use of Nue’s electricity without calling her, you could use her like Kashimo from the same manga, where he himself came up with the idea of dividing electricity into positive (which accumulates in the target or weapon) and negatively charged electrons directed to the ground, for short circuit , thereby creating an attack that never misses
Materialization would be a good option for an archer. You can even use a ready-made version of the ability, this is the Sniper Teigu from Akame ga kill. With the help of 80% predisposition to transformation, it is possible to make it so that the more dangerous the situation for the user, the stronger the weapon that is created using materialization becomes
how will he not be stronger than naruto and sasuke at the end of the anime? Maharaga and all other Shikigami have the potential to surpass both Gojo and the same Sukuna, about Naruto and Sasuke whose attacks do not exceed the strongest, I generally keep quiet
It's a pity that a work with such ideological potential ends ahead of time. As for the Hatsu Magenta, I would suggest another option to use it. Create the second version of 20th Century Boy, use the first version as a damage storage device and turn it into nen, use it in the new version, in which Magenta will have to move constantly on the contrary. In this version, his stand still covers it, but not only his head with shoulders, but also his hands with legs . Other than that, it doesn't matter anymore😓😓😓
Interesting start, I'm waiting for the continuation
you don't seem to understand the meaning of the new order at all. Kathleen can make herself stronger, denser bones and the like, but she cannot exceed human capabilities, and after the abolition of the order, all these modifications will disappear. she is not able to get information about martial arts from nowhere if she has never studied them. And writing about "infinite stamina" or "without any side effects" is stupid, because this is also beyond the scope of this fad