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TheOmniAdviser7mthReplied to Very_PassonSounds similar in practice
(AN: Man I wish I could simply dump all the information about the power system of Prana and everything in one go. But it would be dumb and boring. To make it easier for people to understand, it works a little like Nen from Hunter x Hunter. The Chakra here isn't the energy as described but rather the veins that circulate Prana.- TheOmniAdviser7mthCommented
Werewolf
Her hand was encased in stylish black gloves and her lips formed an embarrassed smile when she noticed Adam looking at her gloves, "Sorry for the gloves. My hands are quite ugly, so I do not like showing them in the open." - TheOmniAdviser7mthReplied to Constantine438
Well, considering he name drops "The Great Old Ones" from Lovecraft Mythos, we're very likely in a convergence of mythologies & folklores.
For instance, how Lycaon had been cursed by Zeus, while Ambrogio had been cursed by Appolon, Hades, and Artemis. - TheOmniAdviser7mthCommented
We praise the great old ones
[You might know other examples such as the Lesser Key of Solomon, Lemegeton, who give access to all knowledge about the 72 devils, or the Necronomicon, which gives access to knowledge about the Great Old Ones] - TheOmniAdviser7mthCommented
Glad I didn't read the prologue then, seeing these paragraph comments
Shuri really felt like bad news was coming her way one after another like an endless barrage. For one she learned that her husband, with whom she had been living a moderately happy marriage life with for many years, was now cheating on her. - TheOmniAdviser7mthReplied to GreenSkies
This might be what is killing his mother as well
[Cain's curse detected] - TheOmniAdviser7mthReplied to Magrijack_2
The author-
But it did not matter. What she lacked the least was time, in the end. - TheOmniAdviser7mthCommentedCh 2 CH 2: FRIEND
- TheOmniAdviser8mthCommentedCh 4 World Creation: World Systems
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God Rank, interesting. I do like the inherent limit on natural things such as Guilds by themselves and dungeons.
With guilds, the highest rank to reach is SS-Rank. For naturally formed dungeons, they won't exceed SSS-rank. But it's different for a Realm-based dungeon. Since they can range from the lowest H-rank to the highest God-Rank. - TheOmniAdviser8mthCommentedCh 3 World Creation: The Beginning
- TheOmniAdviser8mthCommentedCh 2 Portal Contract
- TheOmniAdviser8mthReplied to Daoisty7lrmu
isn't that the same as the king
Notes: "Monarch Ranks from top to bottom. King/Queen, Prince/Princess, Duke/Duchess, Marquess/Marchioness, Earl/Countess, Viscount/Viscountess, Baron/Baroness, Lord/Mistress, Knight/Dame, Non-nobles." - TheOmniAdviser8mthReplied to HermitOfLifeMountCh 1 Key of Opportunities
- TheOmniAdviser8mthCommented
I really want to get into this novel because the concept is really good, but why lock the chapters at 5? That's way too early. I know you said you're new to this, but that's significantly too early for a story to lock. Most readers won't be able to make it passed 5 chapters. I'm still gonna read the rest of the free chapters.
Ch 1 Key of Opportunities - TheOmniAdviser10mthReplied to ShamelessGengar
The Batman who Laughs.
I'm fucking glad Batman is not a villain. - TheOmniAdviser10mthReplied to Mysterious_4_4
Babies and children (to a degree), sure. The Adults? A majority of them were planning to overthrow the people that had been willingly keeping their entire bloodline in their home while knowing that bloodline held nothing but ill will towards them. That's far from innocent, my friend.
No one. Well fuck, that will make things emotionally distressing for everyone involved if I ever have to face my sister in combat while playing the role of a villain. - TheOmniAdviser10mthCommented
T-TRUST?
"Partially," Batman nodded. "I know he's interested in you, and we can use that to our advantage. But also because you're one of the few people I trust enough to take on this mission." - TheOmniAdviser10mthCommented
That is such a raven thing to do
Raven sighed in fake defeat, before she replied in an emotionless tone, "Oh nooo…" - TheOmniAdviser10mthReplied to Donekulda
Portals, remember
Rachel and I made our way through the city, taking in the sights and sounds of the bustling metropolis of Star City. The night was alive with energy, the streets filled with people enjoying the vibrant nightlife.