thank you for the update. looking forward to Scar based abilities. Even just the Deconstruction/Destruction Tattoo makes him very dangerous.

I don't know about Edward, but it seems he is giving himself Scar's Alchemy Tattoos, I forget their official names. One arm is Destruction, the other arm is Transmutation, but i forget with the last one is.

This is a solid story with good writing. The plot isn't overly rushed, nor is it too slow. Something that is quite rare in all honesty. I will say that although the world building is truly great, the character interactions could use a little work. Mainly that people just seem to accept the MC word and suggestions a little to readily.

The story has a lot of potential and the writing quality isn't hard to read and slightly improves along the way so not really an issue. The only thing is the story wasn't updated for months so not sure if it will stick around.

exp cola

Interesting premise