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Even this paragraph is too long for readers. You can just break it into two parts. It's just my suggestion, though.
Also, make each chapter around 1500 to 2000 words to attract readers' attention. If the chapters or paragraphs are too long, they'll simply skip the novel.
No problem. Writing a novel on this platform is mainly about rewriting and improving one's crafting skills, man. As long as you didn't change the main concept of the story, there'll be no problem. Best of luck.