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London_Ellis7mthPostedA good start to this story turned into recycled material and a clear word count push for probably the sake to try and have the story picked up as a contract. if that's your only goal then I hope you get it but there's a lot better ways to get more views and have a successful novel. best of luck going forward, hope you improve on story advancement and much better character development
- London_Ellis7mthReplied to Sai_Tama_0135
spot on. had good potential in the beginning but turned into another frustrating story where the author doesn't put any effort to move the story forward. it appears as a numbers game for author just trying to push out as many words as possible even those it's recycled situations from earlier chapters presented in different ways. hope the author changes his motivation for this story otherwise it'll flop and never blow up in a good way
- London_Ellis1yrCommented
seems way more logical to think he hid strength of a higher level and jumping to something uncommon
"Interesting, this Sects seems to have an Elder named Drake… And he was Rank 3, apparently… Although the Elder did say that he emanated a stronger presence than just Rank 3, he speculated it could be a second Mana Core… But is that the case?" wondered the Sect Master. - London_Ellis1yrCommentedCh 548 Ingredients
- London_Ellis2yrCommented
imagining this definitely had me laughing
But in reality, everyone just made use of Evalia's element to cloak themselves and then ran away as quickly as they could manage. - London_Ellis2yrCommentedCh 480 Heaven and Hell Experience
- London_Ellis2yrCommented
lol I'm pretty sure he's cycling his origin energy to keep his youthful appearance by now cause yea it's been saying 25 for a while now haha
Amongst the two people before them, the red clothed young man ought to be almost 30, whereas, the violet clothed young man was only around 25, no matter how they looked at him. - London_Ellis2yrCommentedCh 1 Su Yang
- London_Ellis2yrCommented
Great chapter, had me hooked pretty good. dont Understand how the Main body can still be in touch with the halfstep great sage though. if the sea of ruination eats away at even his soul to make it a sliver then any connection should be cut off in the sea too. like with noahs clones They arent seperated by cosmic essence but his second body is seperated from the primordial cosmos by ruination. (No hate, i still find it interEsting, just wonder how it works) whats the thought behind this was aside from plot development .
Ch 884 Merely a Great Sage! II - London_Ellis2yrCommentedCh 624 Split your Origin!
- London_Ellis2yrCommentedCh 601 A Party Sets Off
- London_Ellis2yrCommentedCh 1 Back To Past