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poopyscoopy1231yrCommentedBeside her was a small child that looked around my age. She had short white hair and black eyes.- poopyscoopy1231yrCommentedThis paragraph has been deleted.
- poopyscoopy1231yrCommentedAfter going into the front yard I saw my instructor. She had long white hair tied up into a ponytail like my dad. She had a black tattoo that looked like a lightning bolt and was smoking a cigar. When looking into her cold black eyes It felt like she was staring directly into my soul.
- poopyscoopy1231yrCommentedRight next to her was a man around the same age as her. He had his white hair tied back and was smoking a cigar. His eyes seemed to be transparent.
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- poopyscoopy1232yrReplied to Kalawang
I just changed it, look again.
This paragraph has been deleted. - poopyscoopy1232yrReplied to RexHarris
Ok, I'll change it to around the academy which would seem more reasonable.
This paragraph has been deleted. - poopyscoopy1232yrReplied to SwordGod007
Sorry. But when I said that the plot was 4 years before the original plot I thought that meant that the MC was 4 years older than naruto. And in the synopsis, I said that this naruto might have a slightly different timeline than the original. Sorry again.
This paragraph has been deleted. - poopyscoopy1232yrReplied to BlackKingJadeCh 1 Rebirth
- poopyscoopy1232yrCommented
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A - "Yes," Shinji planned to join and get the rank of Chunin as soon as possible. He will train moderately hard during these two weeks as he plans to spend some time with his teammates to make sure they're all for the Chunin Exams.