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isaiah_8095mthCommentedthe amount of people in this comment section who are acting like they could kill kids and people who aren't actively trying to kill them or just someone in general is crazy. there's a reason why killing is looked upon as disgusting and immoral by humanity. and calling the main character soft for being transferred from a normal life to where he should be expected to kill people isn't fair and no the main character having morals and struggling is not bad writing.
Alex's eyes became bloodshot due to the stress and his inner conflict.- isaiah_8098mthReplied to Teza_Sot
skill books are how abilities are taught they'd basically bid on the rights to the abilities or the skill books like an exclusive
If others were to find out of his rare ability it would start a bidding war between the private companies and the military. They would do anything to get their hand on such a new type of ability. Before anyone could find out about Quinn, he had to become strong enough to protect himself. - isaiah_8091yrCommented
author please stop doing this. the main character has been weak for the past 170+ chapters able to be knocked out by anyone. it's not pacing at this point it's just slow
Suddenly, Jin heard a sound from behind him. He quickly looked over his shoulder and was about to teleport away when suddenly, a baseball sunk into his face. There was immediately nothing but darkness for him. He didn't even feel himself collapse.Ā - isaiah_8091yrCommentedCh 123 [Introduction] New World (Part 2)
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*clash
Class Of Cops (Part 4) - isaiah_8091yrCommentedCh 76 The Great Rendell (Part 6)
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he's lying
Jin closed his eyes and leaned his head against the chair. "I don't ... feel much ... anymore. I still feel things within but .... I just can't ... I can't show ... it. I don't feel anything but determination. Nothing but the determination to get stronger. The system is eating away my ability to express emotions and then my emotions are eating each other. And ... and I'm ... scared. I'm scared that ... I might kā" - isaiah_8091yrCommented
smth wrong with him
Flint's eyes began to become fiercer. Darker. His pupils were subtly dilated. His nose looked down on Jin. His shoulders squared. His chin, up. Staggering arrogance. "I'm like a big brother to you. Kneel to me. Do as I say." arrogance even in his tone. - isaiah_8091yrCommented
he went to one party for a singular night and they're so mad. nit everyone has to be a social outcast
"Y'know, I never thought Jin would turn out to be someone to go to parties and stuffā¦" - isaiah_8091yrCommented
W gma
"Don't pretend you're fine when you know you're not. Man up, Jin. If you gotta cry, cry instead of holding it in. 'Cause trust me, you have no idea how crazy holding things in can drive youā¦" - isaiah_8091yrCommented
stupidly dangerous consequences further in the book
[New Skill: Deceptive Delusion] - isaiah_8091yrCommented
me personally I wouldn't take that
"At least my fucking parents didn't leave my sorry 9-year-old ass to live with my uncle and abandon me!" - isaiah_8091yrCommented
Solus means alone in Latin clever one author
"You are supposed to be a great artifact, so I'll name you after the greatest, albeit fictional, magical forgemaster that I always admired when I was a kid. Solus." - isaiah_8092yrCommented
nice reference
On his back was a huge and bulky man donned in the same kind of armor as the first one. He was holding a huge grey and red heater shield with a symbol of a distorted hollow sun and a huge war hammer. He looked extremely like Escanor. - isaiah_8092yrCommentedCh 37 The New Domain of Matthias
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I can't get it out of my head now thanks š no sarcasm
'Stop moping around and listen to me. You keep forgetting that you are two years younger and I have no idea if males and females develop their mana cores at different rates. - isaiah_8092yrReplied to Ezequiel0034
I think you should refrain from spoilers I'm re reading but if I saw this comment on my first run through the mystery would be completely ruined for me.
When the first one to answer its call turned out to be a Ry, the tower core had tried to communicate with the beast, but to no avail. The beast's mind was too different from the first host, making the mind link impossible. - isaiah_8092yrReplied to TheUnsuspicious
Thank you this is my first book. And at this point, I wasn't really sure how to really write it and was really just going off the top of my head with no way of knowing how to construct sentences to be easier and more understandable. You're right the chapters are really short. It gets better at certain points as I learn to type faster and more efficiently. I get tired easily at certain points in the day and sometimes I just don't have enough time but seeing this I will try harder to make each chapter longer and more efficient for the reader. Pacing about that, I think I've improved on that step as well and will look out further for more opportunities to increase the quality of the way I pace my story.
Ch 1 Reincarnation but why? Where and When? - isaiah_8092yrCommented"What theā¦" Rick mouthed with a slack jaw, unable to believe what he was seeing.