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Nikunj_Gupta_5592

Nikunj_Gupta_5592

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2021-06-27 JoinedIndia
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    Nikunj_Gupta_559222 days ago
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    First of all I would like to say im not a person who goes and spreads negativity and neither do I want to usually, u have a good world building and and good writing skills but Fuck u man… how does a being that’s supposed to have 1000x more intelligence and processing power than a normal human make mistakes that even a hobo living on the streets with a hint of common sense won’t make .? Like seriously ?? He thinks of his sister after his world domination from the underworld(like wtf is that ? That’s just a chunni dream that provides no benifits) … and after he knows that people are going to go after him and his family because of what he is , even after being given a warning from shadow that people will go after him , he doesn’t explain anything to his family …. Just says that he “needs to do this” for his parents and lets them roam around freely in a world where just a few hours ago they were surrounded by govt people who wanted to get them to make him listen ………. Bro all I can say is that u are a new author and are just trying to find a way to write overpowered mc story , but this is just not how to do it. I will freely admit that writing a story is not something I am capable of but thank god atleast I didn’t write this monstrosity of a novel . Absolute garbage .

  • Nikunj_Gupta_5592
    Nikunj_Gupta_5592a year ago
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    Bro … I’m actually surprised. I’ve been looking for something like this for ages now. Great concept and amazing storyline. I only wish you could speed up the release a bit more. No worries tho one chapter a day is good enough.