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Would be funny if you could just put Thyme in there and he'd be incapacitated/trapped there. One of the most powerful and dangerous creatures on the planet, having a weakness to simple storage rings.
With Kat's assumptions in mind, Tess telling or making Sue aware of a major aspect of her personality, or whatever you'd like to call it, is even more impactful. If cultivator parties value enlighment like that Tess just telling Sue something and then walking away would be the ultimate power move. Equivalent to a normal noble telling another noble how to govern their land and being right.
Afaik, it doesn't work that way. So far she just transformed her entire body into water and later needed the whole body of water to be in her exact shape to turn back. If it IS possible to turn only part of herself (which would imo make a lot more issues given that she'd basically have a open wound), it would take a LOT of practice and control.
Didn't they just eat? Since this is a village/small town walking home shouldn't take too long. Did they try on outfits for hours?
'...in Euphoria', are you kidding me? First you have that whole questioning about MC wearing odd clothes and having an odd name and she has to dodge the topic by saying she's from the east, presumably another country. And now, Aiyoma happily gives her a tutorial to the whole world's common knowledge and what should be universal to everyone, without even questioning why the MC doesn't know about that?! That's so lazy writing, it's actually sad.
One bite, huh?
Eh. Gotta keep in mind that not every world is as light polluted as ours. In a more medieval world where street lights aren't every 20 meters, and torches are likely similarly uncommon, black should be pretty good. At least if it's not a full moon too. On the other hand, in that case, black is good because it's the same color as the pitch-black surroundings, in which case you can't see anything else either :D so yeah it should be decent but not the best.
Good point, didn't think of that.
She really doesn't have a high opinion of dogs, does she?
Why does he keep calling her Aria Schreiner? It makes it seem as if they are distant acquaintances at best. Significantly detracts from the importance of the 'terrible betrayal'.
Wow, yeah she wants to stir poison with her beak. That's one of the most stupid things I've heard of honestly.
What? And risk drinking whatever unfinished concoction she has in there? Or what about poisons, is she gonna stir those with her beak too?
God, I hate when stupidity is rewarded for protagonists.
I'm getting tired of you writing tired instead of tried.
Cool. At least it's not space as seemingly any other protagonist goes for/gains.
encloser -> enclosure
tired -> tried. It seems this is not a simple mistake but that you actually don't the difference?