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just to let everyone know but the mass evolution chapter's are more of a side story from what I could tell cause he decided to go in to alot of detail about the evolutions unlike his prior style where he just did a brief description of what whent on in them witch i perfer. There is nothing mass about them cause out of the hundreds or maybe thousands of people he has he only evolved 3
the way you did the evolution before where it was just a basic outline of what happened is way better otherwise it just seems like a side story that interrupts the real story. I don't see any mass evolution and its morecthen half way through the mass evolution chapters
the story is really good. it has an interesting beginning but please stop with all the repeated ___ and *** have u ever listened to your book with the audio function of this app it is very annoying and u do it every chapter at least once 3 to 5 of those characters are enough to get your point across. u should edit the early chapters to get rid of them to. I'm going to go find a book without the annoyance now maybe if u fix it ill listen to the rest of it