MasherDon

hes back...

Wall Clock? Brushes and soap? In a run-down village in Naruto's world?

I liked everything at the beginning. But before the hero had time to walk around in the new world, he thought about the harem. I didn't notice the harem tag, but this directly said something about it. Next... Haku? Seriously? I was hoping it would be at least a couple of decades before canon.

The appearance of the planet would not have created a new star. Yes, the planet could be seen thousands of years later when the light reaches the earth.

Before this chapter, everything was in order, but now... He created a bionic eye or lens that you can simply put on anyone at school that is under the surveillance of the special services?

If you don't understand the topic, don't write about it. You'd better avoid the topic of technology.

Azula is of course the main waifu of the world of Avatar, but this is too cliche.

The plot is not bad... But Azula? Maybe at least May or Toph. Certainly not Azula.

I hope I don't have to add the harem tag here. ((((