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Kowatch24

Kowatch24

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  • Kowatch24
    Kowatch241yr
    Replied to I_Am_YourDad

    They get longer later in the story, didn’t realize how short they were when I first started writing as this is my first time writing a Webnovel😄

    Ch 2 Chapter 2 - Present Day
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    Kowatch241yr
    Replied to Wassim_Bari_1

    The ice ability is essentially the frost ability on steroids if that makes sense lol

    After the dome finally came down, Milo was standing where it once was surrounded by three menacing spears of ice rotating around him. Due to concentrating on flying, Corey was unable to throw a wind blast at Milo before all three spears were sent speeding towards him, due to the fear of the three spears connecting, Corey lost concentration and began falling to the ground. Corey threw up a quick wind blast below him to prevent himself from slamming into the ground and came to a landing, but before he could react, Milo had appeared by his side and put his hand on his shoulder, turning Corey into a human popsicle, leaving only his head unfrozen.
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    Kowatch241yr
    Replied to fireballfirebs

    Heatwaves in the northeast are usually close to middle or upper 90s, not quite the 110+ you guys get out west lol

    It was during a heat wave one summer before the dimensional doors had begun to wreak havoc on the earth, and Truman and Milo were still in elementary school. Truman was determined that he would be able to cook an egg using the sweltering summer heat. Milo disagreed and said that there was no way the sun was hot enough to make the egg cook. Milo had also tried at one point when he was younger but his parents had told him that it wouldn't work, saying they had tried the same thing as kids. Because of this Truman spent an entire week trying to prove to Milo that he could cook an egg with the sun. After failing for a week straight and getting in trouble for taking all his family's eggs from their fridge, Truman admitted that he was unable to do it. Milo jokingly told him, "I told you so," and after saying these words, Truman grew angry and frustrated, he hated being proved wrong and after the incident he refused to talk to Milo for a month. Eventually the two made up but it was something that Milo still remembered as a funny story from when he was young.
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    Kowatch241yr
    Replied to Mraykv098

    Thanks for the feedback, Zach's ability is revealed in a chapter 60 :)

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    Kowatch241yr
    Replied to Rex_Lindsay

    Theres a chapter tied to it😄

    Ch 55 Chapter 54 - Assembling the Team
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    Kowatch242yr
    Replied to Craig_Kowatch

    Thanks dad

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    Kowatch242yr
    Replied to Nik_16

    No, starts to seem like it but that was me attempting to steer something in a different direction

    Ch 1 Chapter 1 - They Appear
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    Kowatch242yr
    Replied to Elokla

    There’ a chapter tied to his ability and it’s reveal

    Zach and Milo went on to explain their abilities, and hearing what their abilities were, Richard Brand's eyes lit up like sparklers. "Oh, those are indeed strong, Frost can be extremely powerful due to how flexibly it can be used, I really like your ability as well Zach, it seems quite interesting, it's a shame that it can't be used to its fullest yet, but maybe you can use it when you go on your field experience," Richard said with a wink.
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  • Kowatch24
    Kowatch242yr
    Posted

    Really well written, I enjoy the characters so far, only advice would be to keep chapters closer to the length of chapters closer to the length of chapters 3,4 and 5 as the first two chapters were a bit short. Aside from that I’m excited to see where the story heads next :)

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  • Kowatch24
    Kowatch242yr
    Posted

    Great read, highly recommend it, characters are great, world building is great excited for more to come out. Only complaint is that there aren't more chapters out for me to read :)

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    Blood Dragon Khan
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    Kowatch242yr
    Replied to Dieudonner_17

    Thanks for the feedback, I will do my best to improve my character development and I hope you continue to enjoy reading. :)

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    Kowatch242yr
    Replied to Nyareh_Grant

    They still document everything that happens, especially when there are a number of students involved.

    "Yeah I guess we do," Milo said, as Mark and Allana nodded in agreement. Just then a teacher came in to see the mess left behind by the students fighting. After getting some testimony from the students who watched it happen, they cleared the area and sent the students off to their homeroom class.
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    Kowatch242yr
    Replied to Glezeri

    He adds them in the beginning of the next chapter[img=recommend]

    Ch 71 Chapter 70 - Inspect Level 2
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    Kowatch242yr
    Replied to Evadz01

    Wasn’t planning to go the harem route, I had an idea that I liked better than I originally wrote, but had already set up a crush for Krista in what was already put out, this was just my way of trying to steer it in the new direction I wanted to take[img=recommend]

    Ch 65 Chapter 64 - Confession
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  • Kowatch24
    Kowatch242yr
    Replied to Glezeri

    Thanks for the feedback, the upcoming chapters will definitely be longer[img=recommend]

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    Kowatch242yr
    Replied to Evadz01

    Thanks for the feedback, will definitely try to add more content to chapters from here on [img=recommend]

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    Kowatch242yr
    Replied to DaoistY2v7j1

    Thank you for the review, I hope you continue to enjoy reading, and any feedback you might have is always a big help. :)

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  • Kowatch24
    Kowatch242yr
    Replied to Saucy_boy

    It will make more sense as the story progresses

    When seeing the puzzled look on his face, Krista asked him if it had worked, she hadn't felt a change and still thought that maybe he was just messing around. Milo went on to explain the screen that popped up after plundering her ability and they decided that he should watch the tutorial to see what it was all about. The minute he clicked yes, a video popped up and a voice sounded in his head.
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  • Kowatch24
    Kowatch242yr
    Replied to Dieudonner_17

    Oops, missed a comma, it was meant to say that Chris and Mark were joining Allana in the A class and Krista moved up to the B class

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    Kowatch242yr
    Replied to Buns1423

    Thanks for the review, I hope you you continue to enjoy, and any suggestions would be appreciated

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