Sarah_5034

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Sarah_50343 years ago
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I like how you added other languages to the story.
I would show my drawings to my older brother when my father wasn't looking and he would say, "ā jun, you're amazing." He would pick me up by the waist and spin me around, his smile brighter than anything in the world. He would then say, "I'll always be by your side."
In The Distant Sky
Realistic · Kaede8888
Sarah_50343 years ago
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Love the wording!
I watched the skeletons of trees that lined the road, splitting the city into expensive high rises and the crumbling district of the poor. I watch them. The breathing of the city at dawn. The sounds of the birds waking up. The humans.
In The Distant Sky
Realistic · Kaede8888
Sarah_50343 years ago
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Amazon and macaroni? Smart name!
He went on Amacaronizon to order parts. They came within the hour.
Mac Boy and the Wrath of Dr. Intelligent
Action · QuintinDong
Sarah_50343 years ago
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Love how the wind talks to the character.
My feet wobbled and I realized I was still standing on the edge of the hospital roof. An intense flash of light and dust filled the sky. The wind howled in my ear. "Jump," it whispered. "Then, you can forget about your mother. She left you. She's never coming back. Then, you can forget about your brother. He's in a coma. He's never waking up. Then, you can forget everything, just like your father."
In The Distant Sky
Realistic · Kaede8888
Sarah_50343 years ago
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Cathyia doesn't seem scared of the Grim Reaper, I can tell she has a pretty strong personality.
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The Blood Reaper
Fantasy · Jas_mineZ
Sarah_50343 years ago
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Pretty descriptive, I can imagine the scene in my head. Good job!
The two-thousand story Obelisk stood in the middle of the grand city of Nirvana. Gathered there were the War Generals of the All Worlds. The skyscrapers surrounding the Obelisk cast massive shadows into the war room, where a heated discussion was taking place.
Vessel of the Light
Sci-fi · JalenLee

The Sunlark

Follow Leslie and find out about what happened to Syllia, the "dead" girl

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Loaf

13 year old Annie must fight the lies of her neighbor in order to get her dog back.

Sarah_5034 · Teen

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