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can u make similiar system kind world like author pov/novel extra
i love world buildingg, do more often please thank for the chapter
i personally enjoy it a lot, just continue bro thanks for the update.
with OP mc u need a lot goals to achive, make some kind list of his objective like for example in order to protect his family he need to be strong, but he can't never be there for them, so he make his own force that can cover him up, etc
Wheres the update author, can u make stable update please. It’s really fresh story, not a lot people try hamura descendant as background chatacter. It has a lot potential especially tenseigan and shikotsumyaku not a lot discovered in movie. Can u make it somehow he can increase his bloodline purity to 100% or even break limit that, i love to see what will happen.
idk what to say man, simply marvelous story right here. I like how each character decribe especially tsunade and mc. Don't forget how well u make other pov, it's certainly make the story more interesting. It's not how many fanfic only focus on its mc and i feel that kind of story always to rigid u know, with u describe other pov, it make it seem more open and free. TFTC bro, hope u make more update
maybe u can also add otsutsuki arc like in fanfic Naruto: since ancient time
i have suggestion, maybe try yo build his secret force like wandenreich in bleach or akatsuki/kara. Well because he is to strong it will easily became boring, so for most part of his plan just order his subordinate and only for interesting thing he act himself like for example zero tail arc, akatsuki, the box of bliss, moryo, otsutsuki, kara.
small arc will be nice
With his high level comprehension he can combine all
just suggestion, sword dao is his primary dao, maybe add secondary like alchemist dao or something so he can make his force as foundation
really, u now potion is important especially for learning alchemist that can help almost all his plan
maybe you can focus on magic more, i mean in manhwa jinwo has infinite mana from his black heart. Maybe some sort assassin-magician
1 if he really became alchemist then can u explore more about alchemist and of course he need a lot material and money so maybe also explore about world and business