Freaxx101

out of all fm u choose xiao wu? the most undesirable fm of all time

so pokemon type harem hah

Finally, i like when the mc already powerfull but instead focus on fighting it show the world building and other pov.

as they say, first n second coincidence is normal, but third is no no

can u make at least not the same pattern sharingan, make it visual wise new occular eyes

finally, it’s new way of thinking i like it how the mc try experiment both of the world, unlike a lot transmigrate/reincarnated mc in cultivator story. Love your story dude.

Honestly dude, at first this story has a lot potential and i also like every character bg, but it turn disappointing just like many overlord fanfic. Everytime the mc has chance he just f@ck all the girl, at this point why you don’t make it hent@i story, forget about the plot alltogether.

Can u add time affinity, because time-space is very powerfull and versatil in every verse if u plan to crossover.

is this original or translate? if it’s translate can i have original name please or link to website

i hope u add, god of war game storyline, maybe percy jackson, or other relevant story