Thank you so much for the review Nakasuka! Glad you like my little space opera! :D

Thank you for believing in me, I will improve :D

You are right, it could use more spaces and paragraphs, I kinda put everything like in a block :T

Oh, so it is different than in Spanish, I will need to change quite a lot, but I will be able to do it. This was something that was really eating me up from the inside, haha!

Done, thank you for the recommendation, the words really flew under my radar :T

I have Grammarly :T

Okay, hear me out, I know, I know, "a five-star rating he might just want to call for attention on himself" NO! Hear me out! This novel is awesome, it's just amazing! Take the time to read it, it is just fantastic, out of this freaking world! The characters are amazing and perfectly design 5/5, the quality of the writing is superb 5/5, the story development is just delicious 5/5, the stability of updates is good, for a work of this quality you can't ask daily updates 5/5, and the world background is amazing 5/5 I know still, it looks like a stretch, but it's true, this is a fantastic novel in the making! Read it!!!

Oh god, you can't end it like that, I need more!!! D:

Ah- Ah- my poor little heart! This is too cute to handle, you should have put a warning of wholesome levels out of this world!

I love it! Will keep reading! Plus, this is A plus material to expand my vocabulary, so many new and exiting words :D

Something happens here with the writing, read it, it looks like the draft is still in place and made a little mess :)

Woah woah woah! Hold on mate, she is human, let her process the whole thing, she is a civilian, not a soldier, even if she is in an anarchist cell!

Lol, I didn't think of that xD

Thank you very much :D

Okay, let's write a review. Your story is good, it has a solid plot, but it misses the mark if you ask me. Rather than showing us the protagonist going to different worlds, making friends and enemies, overcoming different dangers and traps, and then dying and going to the next world, leaving all he learned to love behind, you lose that opportunity and focus too much on how he was detach from those lives. Plus, the idea of the main character having full memories and consuming the recipient's soul leaves much of the exploration of the world out of the picture, because he already knows it all. I would recommend telling less and making the exploration more tie to actions and movement, as of now it feels like reading an encyclopedia. Less is more, let the reader fill the blanks and create the ambiance; if you describe everything you will end with a boring list of details that don't sum anything of value to the flow. The second chapter, for example, was boring, it had too much description and little action, and action is really important, I found myself looking forward, seeing when it was going to end, and wanted the protagonist to do something and discover things, not the protagonist going outside to give me a tour of the already known world. Another thing, your character is too perfect, make his experiences have more of an impact on his mind and soul, so far it's like he was an immortal god from the get-go, never being a human, never having time to reflect upon his actions, and inactions. As I said, the story has potential, but it needs a little more polish. Keep up the good work and having fun, best regards, Esoj Vi Aifos.

Thank you so much for the review! Hope you keep coming back to the adventures of Hope and her friends! :D And yes, there is an undertone of despair in the whole novel >:3