Ankit_Gurung_4325
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Ankit_Gurung_43255mthReplied to Einlion"Our babies," corrected Mei, emphasizing the 'our' before revealing, "And no, I have it stowed away safely in my locker. Someone drew a penis and some other colorful images on it using a paint marker, so I had to strip the surface layer and replace it. It's amazing how petty people can be."- Ankit_Gurung_43255mthCommented"Rem is kind of mid." I said and Marin's head snapped to me in absolute horror.
- Ankit_Gurung_43258mthCommentedAfter all, even though he became a tanuki, he could also become a human. His reproduction system, or his genitals, was also normal. Instead, it was much bigger than when he was a human, and he could also make it as huge as he wanted to, considering a tanuki was a famous creature known to fight with its balls.
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2. Ten Shadows - Ankit_Gurung_43259mthCommented
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4. Conflict and Plot. On a scale of 1 to 10, how interesting are the conflicts? Since the characters, along with their motives and abilities really lead to a plot, then one must also consider the twists and turns of the plot. How inventive are they? How exciting? How engrossing? _ - Ankit_Gurung_43259mthCommented
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5. Emotional/intellectual payoff. On a scale of 1 to 10, how well did this story arouse powerful emotions? If it did arouse powerful emotions, were they the proper emotions for the intended audience (as gauged by the age and sex of the protagonists)? Remember that the author shouldn't be hitting the same emotional beats over and over again. - Ankit_Gurung_43259mthCommented
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3. Characterization. On a scale of 1 to 10, how well-drawn are the characters in the story? Good characters should convince us that they grew up in the world or setting that we've placed them in. They should have complex motives and be imbued with conflicting attitudes about life, ethics, politics, and so on. The characters should have friends, enemies, acquaintances, secrets, desires and fears. The character should have a physical body, with a physical history. The character should have a family, of course, and some type of history, along with a place in society. In short, with a poorly drawn character, we know virtually nothing about him by the end of the story. With a well-drawn character, we feel as if we know him intimately by the end of the story. _ - Ankit_Gurung_43259mthCommented
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2. Setting. On a scale of 1 to 10, how well was the setting developed? A 1 indicates that the setting was poorly developed. This means that is almost completely disappeared from the story, or that I felt confused as to where and when the tale took place in one or more scenes. Of course, the author should involve all of the senses in describing his or her setting. A 10 means that not only is the setting well-developed, but it informs every aspect of the story—from character development to tone and narrative style. In a story that rates a 10, the setting itself is a powerful draw for the story, and the author succeeded in transporting me into the tale. _ - Ankit_Gurung_43259mthCommented
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1. Originality. On a scale of 1 to 10, how original was this story? A 1 means that the story is cliché while a 10 means that it has at least a couple of ideas that I haven't encountered before. - Ankit_Gurung_43251yrCommentedOr,,, not Incest please....
- Ankit_Gurung_43251yrCommentedBut I hear breastfeeding is more beneficial for a newborn baby than formula milk. This isn't my excuse to enjoy breastfeeding! This is essential for my health. Don't judge me, people!!
- Ankit_Gurung_43251yrCommentedCh -1 I'm back.
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[Mieruko-chan and her hell prince] - Mieruko, a young woman who unlike other people, could see the paranormal...the ghosts were scary...and she almost fell victim because she accidentally looked at one, if it wasn't for the handsome man who proclaimed himself to be the prince of hell. A female main character romance story between the beauty and the beast. - Ankit_Gurung_43251yrCommented
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Reincarnated in Doraemon as Nobita - Ankit_Gurung_43252yrCommentedCh 563 A New Day