A SLIME BUSINESS???? I STAN

hehe this is nice

Good grammar, organized, easy to comprehend, and it flows smoothly, but there's a lack of emotion and the pacing is more suited towards school essays. Keep it up ilyyy

funny, hilarious, loving it. beautiful work as always

the most eloquent and hardest-hitting prose ever. And dare I say it... Better than all seven books of the Harry Potter franchise! But I got smarter, I got harder in the nick of time Honey, I rose up from the dead, I do it all the time I got a list of names, and yours is in red, underlined I check it once, then I check it twice, oh! Ooh, look what you made me do Look what you made me do Look what you just made me do Look what you just made me... Ooh, look what you made me do Look what you made me do Look what you just made me do Look what you just made me do I (I) don't (don't) like your kingdom keys (keys) They (they) once belonged to me (me) You (you) asked me for a place to sleep Locked me out and threw a feast (what?) The world moves on, another day another drama, drama But not for me, not for me, all I think about is karma And then the world moves on, but one thing's for sure Maybe I got mine, but you'll all get yours But I got smarter, I got harder in the nick of time (nick of time) Honey, I rose up from the dead, I do it all the time (I do it all the time) I got a list of names, and yours is in red, underlined I check it once, then I check it twice, oh![img=recommend]

Ouw this writing is too good it hurts