trowing stones at retards is a welcome back custom in my lands ^^ & there already flying ^^ missed this nice story

would prop tag along with these meatheads & have a fun time its definitly a good story so good in fakt i did loose ma stones somewhere here without noticing just hope baal wil be a good partner for zorro & would like to see some unlikable chars getting screwed over hard by his other bodys

sadly i did not cuz i need to find these first absolutly love ranma ½ peak comedy gold & jeah like this novel to cant wait 4 the next chaps ^^

well i like the novel to this point stones good earnt today what im missing a bit in the story is this i was a dude now girl & what complications comes up cuz of the difference & maybee bit more inner dialoge comedy with that thematic also would be fitting in regards to og inner sakura is definitly a good novel keep up the good work ^^

oops i think i lost my stones somewhere in that chapter anyway very good story but that whole cheating on debra thing is kinda a bummer but the rest is entertainment gold

my suggestion is skip that week where paige is away & show the trainings results ( or just for now some little parts) when she is back in training the 3 together from there the big skip with some slice of life chaps leading up to start of college maybee with some minor goals like a new mission & that visit at apple the character interactions are enyojable i think the story is currently in summer therse certanly a summer fest, harvest fest, christmad, valentine who could get some nice chill chaps its a good novel that i like even if i kinda wish i would have found it a jeahr later cuz binge reading ^^

nice its finaly goning on here take ma stones

cant imagine gotham with a sunny weather foggy &/or raining & clear sky only in the night ^^

jeah 10j koma is quite a bit lame but lets see how its hoing on

its such a wastet oportunety of BATuties a real shame ^^

honestly i hate web shooters bioweb is way superior but so far still a good novel

oh my a fan novel that diveates from the original how preposterous (kapa) you shall burn in [ text here ] for your sinfull demenor (lol) all hail the great one

jeah its a good story what would be a nice side chap idea is the great emperor and the lovley princess on a disney park day after big action some slice of live

well thats a good novel would love some more chaps

uj now its becomming intresting

ooops i droppt ma stones where would thy be

still a good novel thumps up

there is no real dragon ball story without a dragon ball hunt and thats the first one i read that has one like that

would love to tardis 2-3j into tha future to read a full jab but sadly i have not a tardis nor im a 4 dimensional beeing so its tha waiting game for me still love that novel

still a very good novel but the chaps are kinda short still love the novel already lost ma stones here