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  • Lamians
    Lamians8mth
    Replied to Tsetth

    you are fighting here? what a coincedence dumb ass of author. Remember me? i Put tons of comments in your book cuz your MC just gave away his talent to his enemy. what a BS plot hanger.

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    Martial God Gamer
    Eastern · CrazeNovel
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    Lamians8mth
    Replied to animeanything

    I bet the author is Gay who thinks being straight is too cliche. And Do you think you are George rr Martin or something? Do you believe that a newbie writer would have such trust from the reader that they would read every single chapter to look for the reason instead of dropping it right away? The first chapters are very crucial for world-building and character-building. cuz first chapters are read without skipping a single word. You can't just keep such infromation hidden as plot hanger? if you dont know what plot hanger is its hiding something that would keep the readers hanging throughout the book. plot hanger isn't something that you can easily pick. and depriving readers of such a useful info like the reason of the mc transfering his talents is just the worst type of plot hanger you can find

    altalt
    The Founder of Qi Cultivation, Reincarnates?
    Eastern · TSETTH
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  • Lamians
    Lamians8mth
    Replied to LucifurMorningstar

    I bet the author is Gay who thinks being straight is too cliche. And Do you think you are George rr Martin or something? Do you believe that a newbie writer would have such trust from the reader that they would read every single chapter to look for the reason instead of dropping it right away? The first chapters are very crucial for world-building and character-building. cuz first chapters are read without skipping a single word. You can't just keep such infromation hidden as plot hanger? if you dont know what plot hanger is its hiding something that would keep the readers hanging throughout the book. plot hanger isn't something that you can easily pick. and depriving readers of such a useful info like the reason of the mc transfering his talents is just the worst type of plot hanger you can find

    altalt
    The Founder of Qi Cultivation, Reincarnates?
    Eastern · TSETTH
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  • Lamians
    Lamians8mth
    Replied to Gordon_sensie

    I bet the author is Gay who thinks being straight is too cliche. And Do you think you are George rr Martin or something? Do you believe that a newbie writer would have such trust from the reader that they would read every single chapter to look for the reason instead of dropping it right away? The first chapters are very crucial for world-building and character-building. cuz first chapters are read without skipping a single word. You can't just keep such infromation hidden as plot hanger? if you dont know what plot hanger is its hiding something that would keep the readers hanging throughout the book. plot hanger isn't something that you can easily pick. and depriving readers of such a useful info like the reason of the mc transfering his talents is just the worst type of plot hanger you can find

    altalt
    The Founder of Qi Cultivation, Reincarnates?
    Eastern · TSETTH
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  • Lamians
    Lamians8mth
    Replied to Tsetth

    I bet the author is Gay who thinks being straight is too cliche. And Do you think you are George rr Martin or something? Do you believe that a newbie writer would have such trust from the reader that they would read every single chapter to look for the reason instead of dropping it right away? The first chapters are very crucial for world-building and character-building. cuz first chapters are read without skipping a single word. You can't just keep such infromation hidden as plot hanger? if you dont know what plot hanger is its hiding something that would keep the readers hanging throughout the book. plot hanger isn't something that you can easily pick. and depriving readers of such a useful info like the reason of the mc transfering his talents is just the worst type of plot hanger you can find

    altalt
    The Founder of Qi Cultivation, Reincarnates?
    Eastern · TSETTH
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  • Lamians
    Lamians8mth
    Replied to OPRamenGuy

    You transfer your talent to your brother who plans to kill you ? how is he sure that his brother wouldn't kill him afterwards? Author wanted to get out of cliche plots, but he did something that is way way worse than cliche. moronic author with twisted thinking. I bet the author is Gay who thinks being straight is too cliche why not just be gay

    altalt
    The Founder of Qi Cultivation, Reincarnates?
    Eastern · TSETTH
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  • Lamians
    Lamians8mth
    Replied to DaPashini

    You transfer your talent to your brother who plans to kill you ? how is he sure that his brother wouldn't kill him afterwards? Author wanted to get out of cliche plots, but he did something that is way way worse than cliche. moronic author with twisted thinking. I bet the author is Gay who thinks being straight is too cliche why not just be gay

    altalt
    The Founder of Qi Cultivation, Reincarnates?
    Eastern · TSETTH
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  • Lamians
    Lamians8mth
    Replied to XLucifer_AceX

    You transfer your talent to your brother who plans to kill you ? how is he sure that his brother wouldn't kill him afterwards? Author wanted to get out of cliche plots, but he did something that is way way worse than cliche. moronic author with twisted thinking. I bet the author is Gay who thinks being straight is too cliche why not just be gay

    altalt
    The Founder of Qi Cultivation, Reincarnates?
    Eastern · TSETTH
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  • Lamians
    Lamians8mth
    Commented

    You transfer your talent to your brother who plans to kill you ? how is he sure that his brother wouldn't kill him afterwards? Author wanted to get out of cliche plots, but he did something that is way way worse than cliche. moronic author with twisted thinking. I bet the author is Gay who thinks being straight is too cliche why not just be gay

    Ch 72 Chapter 70- A Celestial Treasure Beneath The Academy
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    The Founder of Qi Cultivation, Reincarnates?
    Eastern · TSETTH
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  • Lamians
    Lamians8mth
    Commented

    You transfer your talent to your brother who plans to kill you ? how is he sure that his brother wouldn't kill him afterwards? Author wanted to get out of cliche plots, but he did something that is way way worse than cliche. moronic author with twisted thinking. I bet the author is Gay who thinks being straight is too cliche why not just be gay

    Ch 75 Chapter 73- Wang Fei Yin Seeking Death
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    The Founder of Qi Cultivation, Reincarnates?
    Eastern · TSETTH
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  • Lamians
    Lamians8mth
    Commented

    You transfer your talent to your brother who plans to kill you ? how is he sure that his brother wouldn't kill him afterwards? Author wanted to get out of cliche plots, but he did something that is way way worse than cliche. moronic author with twisted thinking. I bet the author is Gay who thinks being straight is too cliche why not just be gay

    Ch 474 Chapter 471- Hi There
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    The Founder of Qi Cultivation, Reincarnates?
    Eastern · TSETTH
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  • Lamians
    Lamians8mth
    Commented

    You transfer your talent to your brother who plans to kill you ? how is he sure that his brother wouldn't kill him afterwards? Author wanted to get out of cliche plots, but he did something that is way way worse than cliche. moronic author with twisted thinking. I bet the author is Gay who thinks being straight is too cliche why not just be gay

    Ch 476 Chapter 473- God Race And Devil Race
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    The Founder of Qi Cultivation, Reincarnates?
    Eastern · TSETTH
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  • Lamians
    Lamians8mth
    Commented

    You transfer your talent to your brother who plans to kill you ? how is he sure that his brother wouldn't kill him afterwards? Author wanted to get out of cliche plots, but he did something that is way way worse than cliche. moronic author with twisted thinking. I bet the author is Gay who thinks being straight is too cliche why not just be gay

    Ch 478 So... What's Next?
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    The Founder of Qi Cultivation, Reincarnates?
    Eastern · TSETTH
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  • Lamians
    Lamians8mth
    Commented

    You transfer your talent to your brother who plans to kill you ? how is he sure that his brother wouldn't kill him afterwards? Author wanted to get out of cliche plots, but he did something that is way way worse than cliche. moronic author with twisted thinking. I bet the author is Gay who thinks being straight is too cliche why not just be gay

    Ch 4 Chapter 2- Fu Wei You Bastard!!… The Celestial Academy’s Rigid Qualifications
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    The Founder of Qi Cultivation, Reincarnates?
    Eastern · TSETTH
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  • Lamians
    Lamians8mth
    Commented

    grammar has left the chat

    Ch 1 Motive of Strength
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    SSS SKILL: DUPLICATE
    Urban · imWold
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  • Lamians
    Lamians8mth
    Commented

    many spelling errors waste of money

    Ch 1 Motive of Strength
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    SSS SKILL: DUPLICATE
    Urban · imWold
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  • Lamians
    Lamians1yr
    Replied to Dieudonner_17

    bate

    Gathering every strength his body can mutter, Jason Mccray opens his heavy eyelids, a simple tidy room came into view. Being unable to make out why he was laying down with pain all over his body, though soon after the figures of two people sitting not too far from him came into view.
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    Unrivaled Under The Heaven
    Eastern · flamezdoa
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  • Lamians
    Lamians2yr
    Commented

    For once let the MC have high grade talent

    "My body is too weak and has little talent for cultivation." Lord Xie Yang sighed.
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    Awakened: The Spirit King!
    Fantasy · ProfessorBai
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  • Lamians
    Lamians2yr
    Commented

    I feel like you didnt even read your own story once before posting

    Ch 1 Qin Yan Introduction And His Mother ill
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    Misthic Dragon Vimpire system
    Fantasy · Darkchoco
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  • Lamians
    Lamians2yr
    Commented

    IMC = Idiot Main character

    Initially, Ryder had his doubts about how safe it was, but the glasses did come with the certification from the world's biggest scientific organization IMC. 
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    Divinity: Against the Godly System
    Games · Demonic_angel
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