shameless review by the author As this is my first novel but don't except much but please tell me the mistake so i can improve them

good at end was rushed for next novel but it's ok and very gooood

author ending was rushed it could have been much longer as u wanted to see the multiverse part but u were amazing it's so amazing but kaira at then end become just a side character as Sam mature but love it bro

just imagine u were just reading for time pass and it's turn into a series of fun emotional and i am one of that person who just read for fun but ended up reading till last of the chapter i haven't finished it buts it's good, author try to add some mystery to its which is interesting such the golden finger mystery, his first disciple or eldest disciple he is also a renic ... i am not gonna spoil it but it's 👍😊 for me so it can be good read for you

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