Param555

concept is grt .. i mean different. that earns my respect

one foot in grave ..... not feet fk

I have read 1300+ chapters .... last chaps just title .. It keeps me reading .. cause story doesn't get stagnant but ultimately we know that he becomes almighty ... but daym the plot armour like " world purifying light " sucks for me .. giving whackk feeling

nirvana ?

not bad

getting bored i say nothing mystery , interesting , surprising

General suggestions : not saying you committed mistakes .. plot is boss .. it make reader stay . plan out story , connect dots, 3/4 description, 1/4 dialogue .. or half half . never drag, keep simple , keep running

writing, description all good but people don't usually live in such dark world ... it's bit unpleasant to brain😂 .

daymm .. so dark

i mean it's cool .. i have been reading