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MC need something like true damage or soul killing
Although I am going to read this one, But I am disappointed a bit about powers, I was thinking about an MC who reincarnated in the world, become vampire, He has High intelligence with mind shield, MC created tech that is sci fi and try to make himself more human while still being immortal. But still better than nothing.
MC being boxer, already have two modern family fanfic which Take almost the same route, I was hoping He would have done something different, like private detective or Try to make virtual reality game or try to in Car making business wher MC try to make new futuristic cars or in tech or science.
Author other abilities are good but instead of giving him Adaptive evolution or Getting his enemies abilities permanently, MC should be given peak human status and Temporary resistance towards the enemy abilities, Which make MC OP for only when you want and not all time, And The ability to reborn can come with temporary penalty instead of power up
yes, although it has become a joke nowadays in fanfic but authors need to understand that in this type of situation who MC react show how much Situational awareness He has
I am kinda disappointed in MC, He only focus on Muscle, he don't even tried to see if his mind improve
if MC also learn how to fix stuff or learn some useful knowledge it would be more comfortable to live
Author you better have an explanation about how MC brother get this power, Don't make it as if he always have it
ok Author what is going on, MC status point double when he was 7 years old and so after leveling up and getting annual bouns, it should be more right
and Issei even had his own peerage after he become free, their is also Senji who got free after becoming higher devil I think