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why every Chinese MC love Orochimaru so much, it's like all the Chinese are obsessed with him. I see hardly any fan fiction in which Orochimaru don't work for Mc
why don't mc get strength increase
ok so I check the original a little bit and I will say that this fanfic had the potential but author ruined it, it could have gone like how King from one punch is both lucky and unlucky at the same time. or Mc could have been truly lucky hero who just walk normally and save the world just by step on something.could have slowly got power but not so soon. I think You should take the idea and make it better
this is just pure idio, you go to a secret government organization and call the director name like you now about him, Now if he thinks you are a spy or some with bad intention is not wrong on fury part
but wasn't he reborn in someone else's body
not really, How will he knows that MC have cheat which help him grow stronger. he just think that mc got two new power's even if their potential is why more then it show, it will still take quite the time to make these abilities strong. so he is right from his point of view
it did say that you can get the bloodline you wish, so you can even combine saiyan with other powerful bloodline and remove their weaknesses
the same old line " I can change him / her "
don't that mean he can have any bloodline in existence
this one and please make it more readable, even if you have to change many things
wait a second how old is he 18 right, them why are they teaching them 13 years old class subject
why don't he complete Title quest?
It's the same as we like anime and manga. have you seen how many people latterly spend their fortune on figures and Thief trying to steel and sell them. So yes even grownup old people have these things
If you want too read about how An Mc that has powerful system but don't use it to its full potential and go after any girl he see ( but he doesn't chase them he just buy skills from system that make every 10 years old girl fall for him ), at the start it was good but after all he is think is how to get 10 years old using system skills. Like he was a grown man and he is doing this and when it comes to playing with his brother he thinks it's childish behavior ( although he still play with him). This story would have been better with an Op Mc and The different Harry Potter world. But author made this story about a pedophile