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Bubble_Bunny_Happy3mthCommentedAuthor, pls, PLEASE stop saying a character's face showed an emotion but then say a calm facade hid their emotions. HOW DOES THIS MAKE ANY SENSE?!? How would a character show emotion on their face and none at all at the SAME TIME?!? It does not make sense AT ALL! Please change how you phrase your character's facial expression and mood.(I'm really sorry if I am being rude, however this is something that is just really annoying to read. Sorry.)
Section chiel Samuel looked mad that he had to stop but his calm face hide it all. Horas was too tired to even flinch when he was being looked at with such disdain.- Bubble_Bunny_Happy9mthReplied to Irlandez
hmmm... thank you for information... nonetheless the name of the story is still origunally called the tortoise and the hare. Thank though! :D
He started to tell a story from his past life, it was the story of the fast rabbit and the slow turtle. - Bubble_Bunny_Happy10mthReplied to ObserverofLight
thank you >^<
It was the time when those people will come to meet us. I, Anya, Ainge, and Ron were dressed in formal clothing and waiting for them in the guest room. - Bubble_Bunny_Happy11mthCommented
long big bread= bagguette :D
He laughed loudly and left the city with a long big bread in his arm he bought from the shop beside the potion shop. - Bubble_Bunny_Happy11mthReplied to Bubble_Bunny_Happy
also it isnt a turtle, it is a tortoise . Turtles live in the sea :/
He started to tell a story from his past life, it was the story of the fast rabbit and the slow turtle. - Bubble_Bunny_Happy11mthCommented
its a hare bruh not a rabbit
He started to tell a story from his past life, it was the story of the fast rabbit and the slow turtle. - Bubble_Bunny_Happy1yrCommented
Period cramps are no joke they hurt like heck
'Don't be a fuckin drama queen. I lowered the pain index to the lowest possible setting. The pain you are feeling now is similar to period pains girls experience when aunt flow pays them a visit every month,' said the system wishing it could flee from such an embarrassing situation. If they were in public it would definitely pretend not to know him. - Bubble_Bunny_Happy1yrCommented
random question, what happened to the original fanxui of this body?
And was reborn in an alternate reality. - Bubble_Bunny_Happy1yrCommented
Ayo!?!
Lu An smiled and took Ergou from the man. She took out a small plastic bag and stuffed Ergou inside before putting it into her bag. - Bubble_Bunny_Happy1yrCommented
wait... so like a roblox character?
In the span of a few simple words, his master was dressed like a normal youngster in a normal white t-shirt and jeans; it looked like a couple's outfit when paired with the girl who had rescued the dog not far away. His master stepped forward on long and straight legs, and strode toward the girl. He went! - Bubble_Bunny_Happy1yrCommented
Huh!?!?!?
"And here I was thinking the Marshal would honour me with a visit," he said in a low husky voice that could get a girl pregnant just by hearing it. - Bubble_Bunny_Happy1yrReplied to moon_senpai
- Bubble_Bunny_Happy1yrPosted
The story is really good actually however the grammar can just be downright awful sometimes and the fight scenes are incredibly boring after a while bcuz they take several chapters and the names just randomly seem to get mixed up sometimes. Overall pretty good but authors POV is better for people who notice grammar mistakes and mald / get angry. Nice book still!
- Bubble_Bunny_Happy1yrCommentedCh 170 Klauth [1]
- Bubble_Bunny_Happy1yrCommented
is fingerless gloves I think. But seriously, gloves without fingers in them? THAT SOUNDS SO CREEPYYYY
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That is... breathing
Realizing that there weren't many spiders around anymore, he took a breath of relief and relaxed his body a bit and provided it with some oxygen. He wiped the blood off his face that had splashed there when he was slashing the monstrous spiders. - Bubble_Bunny_Happy1yrReplied to Geegollymiss_H81
oh, thx for the explanation!
Eating, cleaning the kitchen then preparing for school was the daily activities Ming Yue had in the past life. However she didn't want to do it anymore. Now, Ming Yue planned to break away from this hellish house. This time for sure, she would leave this house and never returned. - Bubble_Bunny_Happy1yrCommented
water?
Hence, with the help of sub-element ice, I cooled down the air around my face and chest, thus countering the heat coming from the sword. The sword's handle was so hot that my hands were getting red, I couldn't cool it since there was a chance of getting frostbite so I'll leave it be. - Bubble_Bunny_Happy1yrCommentedCh 30 Not Him
- Bubble_Bunny_Happy1yrCommented
grammatically, you are supposed to address yourself last. Ew, I sound pretentious
It was the time when those people will come to meet us. I, Anya, Ainge, and Ron were dressed in formal clothing and waiting for them in the guest room.