私はこれが好きです、私はちょうどそれにつまずいて、私は物語に夢中になっています。これを書いてくれてありがとう。 もっと読みますありがとう.........................................................................

I like the characters and how they are described. I would want to see more development and their personality as the story goes on. It's quite good, I'll be waiting for the next chapter.