DaoistOnmiGd

nothing interesting apart from a few paragraphs in the chapter 2 and 3, the gluttony skil was interesting and level upbut apart from these, others paragraphs felt like filler food bath etc.the first Three chapter did not evoke to read further and gave like harem vibes even though there isn't a harem tag in the novel tags.I stand by with my reviews and will drop this book,I guess it's not my cup of tea :(like I said earlier you can delete my comments have a good day and peace out.

honestly, I don't wanna sound hurtful or anything along the lines, but first chapter is not good, I will listed the reason why in below1.) there was no element of curiosity or conflict in the chapter it felt like normal common chapter in a novel, if I want to be more clear it felt like filler2.) there was to much dialogue and charcter in fisrt chapter, I don't want to know or learn this much character from just in the beginning when I still trying to understand the novel to see what is this book about3.) too much character appearance description, in the fist chapter this is really a bad thing, to see every charcter appearance details like she is beautiful short, has nice curves etc4.) system panel in the first chapter should not this long it's felt confusing, before seeing the system I'd like to know system difference from others without actually seeing the system panel, I don't know if I explained myself clearly but I think you can understand what I am trying to convey^^ above was the things that I found bad.#####the only good thing about the first chapter is that it's well written meaning writing style was god and there was no grammer mistake####this is my review about first chapter, honestly I was going to post this as a review but after seeing you only started this novel recently I decided against it I didn't want to leave a 2 star review, that's way I post it here.Note to the author: you can delete my comments if you feel I am wrong, I won't bug you or accuse you with anything, I just want to point out a few things peace out and good luck,

in the first chapter showing this long system panel and complicated things like stats and abilities I personally think it's not good. I don't want to see system this earlier. anyway I continue to read, peace out

I only read first 5 chapters and my impression from that, this story is not your typical fl story, sure there is cold ml but it's not like in the other stories where this coldness exaggerated in evey chapter like ml spoke and the whole room turned chill or any other typical cliches so that's a good point. but to me the best point is there wasn't any instant falling in love in fl she didn't ack like a lovesick girl the moment she saw him she just thought he is handsome and moved on. about writing quality honestly it's isn't best one out there but it's good it's own way, it perfectly fit this story, i liked the descriptions and details it was vivid and easy to imagine. another best point for this novel is it's Completed so there isn't any waiting or the possibility of the novel dropped. if you're looking for a novel that short and finished i think this is one of the best in this category. it has curious and perfect start you just need to read the first 5 chapter, I'll update my review after finishing and write a whole review for now peace out-WoE-