Hmm

I find this novel interesting for the most part, minimal error in grammar and punctuation, while i find it funny that she lied about a boyfriend albeit a famous artist a lie is stil a lie and should not be encouraged. Why did she move to a city so far away from comfort understandably most persons in the early stages of adulthood always spout some such nonsense like privacy and alone time and wanting to spread wings as a reason to leave the comfort and security of home but in a town where you knows noone you have random guy in your house and friendly with females you just met, person are twofaced and most put up a facade but that is a story for another time. All in all the story is fairly written up, character stories need further development, she does a it too much inner monologuing for my taste but to each their own, chapters are a bit too short but overall very good effort

Nice novel updates slow though