Le_Krackeen
I'm a beginner novelist, and I want to share the stories that I kept imagining. Hope you like my work ! You can support my story here : https://ko-fi.com/lekrackeen
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I said at some point that the kingdom had put an embargo on them and refused to sell any food! The real reason for doing that apart from the king wanting to personally control this area is revealed later!
I did say in chapter 168 that he completed more than a third! It was a bit more than a month ago, and since he don't have any mana cores anymore, it will take some time before he reaches the seventh rank! Right now he should be around half the completion
Thank you! I fixed it
Thank you, I fixed it!
No. If you read again, you'll see Rohan had only saw the result, not the process. Also, can you be polite? Even more when the issue came from you.
Actually you can't be more wrong, the story is about Rohan, a son of a nobleman who will travel around and will more or less discover the truth of this world. Because of what he will see, because of his encounters, because of the world, he will be more ruthless. It can already be seen in the chapter 50 or so. If you continue you'll see that he simply would have no choice but to kill. Like I said, it is because my character is growing up. For now he is still a naive boy.
If you are refering to the 19th chapter then I can't say anything to you, the mc is 14 at this point. Will he be ruttless without any reason? no! Will he be ruthless in the futur? yes. And actually faster than you think. That is call growing up. But in any case please be aware of your manner, and don't insult like you have done in your comments. You do not like my novel? Sure. But you don't have to insult me or my work, thank you.
around 180cm which is like 5ft10, but he is still growing since he's only 16, soon 17 đ
You are only at the 2nd chapter, and unfortunately, you can't be more wrong. It will be the case for a few chapters in the beginning because Rohan is like that, but who doesn't grow? He's like 13 yo at this point, don't forget that and give it a chance đ
Thank you for pointing out, I'll correct that right away!
yes I needed to change that, thanks!
No problem! đ