TanG

Fix needed on this para

Finally i akipped most of the chapters to come here… will read them when i am bored and have nothing to do

I feel you have a deeicated set of readers…. I love how your books start i do hope it remains free till the plot actually develops

It was yellow academy righth??? Names of places are fetting mixed up

This subtle flirting is so on the point right now… Really needed this now

I dont remember mountain king in the story!!!! When did he gain this??

Production team or village or town????

No the final demon of oblivion since you cant remember his name

How is the 3 clan leader asterion(sorry for the spelling) a dreamspawn that too favoured by ariel…..and bo mention of parentage and effie is 8 months preggers and they are in a river of time and rhey could return whenever spell sends them back to right ???

Who bella!!!!!