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ibub_saint

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A graphic designer for more than 20 years in different Publications and Outsourcing Companies, locally and abroad. He paid regular visits to the Cultural Center of the Philippines.

2021-06-17 JoinedPhilippines
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  • ibub_saint
    ibub_saint11mth
    Commented

    Thank you for posting this.

    Ch 1 Deleting this book from this site (and why)
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    Webnovel refuses to remove novels upon author request. They don't own the content!!! Respect your terms of publishing, you webnovel fucks.3
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  • ibub_saint
    ibub_saint11mth
    Commented

    Sorry guys but after reading this article, It's pretty obvious that I need to get out of here. There is no respect for the authors.

    Ch 1 Deleting this book from this site (and why)
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    Webnovel refuses to remove novels upon author request. They don't own the content!!! Respect your terms of publishing, you webnovel fucks.3
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  • ibub_saint
    ibub_saint11mth
    Replied to Stephanie_Rasanya_1576

    Yes. I agree with that. It definitely needs improvements.

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    Contemporary Romance · ibub_saint
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  • ibub_saint
    ibub_saint11mth
    Replied to Stephanie_Rasanya_1576

    It's an old movie.

    I was never scared because I always thought I was the dangerous one. I saw someone come out of the dark it was stingily familiar.
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    My Demonic Fantasy
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  • ibub_saint
    ibub_saint11mth
    Replied to Stephanie_Rasanya_1576

    Yes, I know your intent. That's why I said it's not a mistake. I'm just giving you an insight on how your readers think.

    Ch 2 My Desires Will Not Die With Me
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    My Demonic Fantasy
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  • ibub_saint
    ibub_saint11mth
    Commented

    Even if these are your demonic fantasies, you can still provide your readers important hints about what's going on in your head.

    Ch 2 My Desires Will Not Die With Me
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    My Demonic Fantasy
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  • ibub_saint
    ibub_saint11mth
    Commented

    It's a good read, but since you asked for comments on your mistake... Well, it isn't actually a mistake, but rather a room for improvement. 1. I can't seem to visualize, your character. There's no description. What color is her hair, her age, her clothes. 2. I have no idea what's going on with the main character. Why is she getting these visions, and who is the mysterious man? Like I said, this is not a mistake on your part. Rather, these are just some points I wanted for myself as a reader.

    Ch 2 My Desires Will Not Die With Me
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    My Demonic Fantasy
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  • ibub_saint
    ibub_saint11mth
    Commented

    Ok, that's good for an introduction. Let's read further. :)

    Ch 1 My Dreams Came Alive
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    My Demonic Fantasy
    Fantasy Romance · Stephanie_Rasanya_1576
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  • ibub_saint
    ibub_saint11mth
    Commented

    Definitely End of Days.

    I was never scared because I always thought I was the dangerous one. I saw someone come out of the dark it was stingily familiar.
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  • ibub_saint
    ibub_saint11mth
    Commented

    Reminds me of Arnold Schwarzenegger, End of Days

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