Thank you for posting this.

Sorry guys but after reading this article, It's pretty obvious that I need to get out of here. There is no respect for the authors.

Yes. I agree with that. It definitely needs improvements.

It's an old movie.

Yes, I know your intent. That's why I said it's not a mistake. I'm just giving you an insight on how your readers think.

Even if these are your demonic fantasies, you can still provide your readers important hints about what's going on in your head.

It's a good read, but since you asked for comments on your mistake... Well, it isn't actually a mistake, but rather a room for improvement. 1. I can't seem to visualize, your character. There's no description. What color is her hair, her age, her clothes. 2. I have no idea what's going on with the main character. Why is she getting these visions, and who is the mysterious man? Like I said, this is not a mistake on your part. Rather, these are just some points I wanted for myself as a reader.

Ok, that's good for an introduction. Let's read further. :)

Definitely End of Days.

Reminds me of Arnold Schwarzenegger, End of Days