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Arai_Shiro

Arai_Shiro

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Nothing much, just a person who loves reading novels and things.

2021-06-17 JoinedGlobal
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  • Arai_Shiro
    Arai_Shiro2 years ago
    Posted

    It's definitely a good read for me. Plot is interesting and the cliche count isn't that much when compared to other works of this genre. It's easy to understand the reasoning of the main character, making it easier to connect to the story. World building looks good so far. With kingdoms, sects, villages etc. Overall it's a solid 4.6 for me

  • Arai_Shiro
    Arai_Shiro2 years ago
    Posted

    The story is interesting and enjoyable. The way the characters are portrayed makes it easier to understand them, especially their feelings and the line of thoughts. Although the story seems a little fast paced at the start it is still good. Writing quality is pretty good too. The choice of words to describe things makes the story more enjoyable. Overall 4.8

  • Arai_Shiro
    Arai_Shiro2 years ago
    Posted

    The story is really interesting and the way the author executes it is pretty good. Although the story is somewhat fast paced it makes for that with contents. The way the story and the characters are processed makes it easier to understand and connect with the story. The fact that the characters are things you can find in the normal life makes it easier to relate to things. Currently, there's 0 chapters for week and looks like it's been like that for a while so I gave the updating stability 2 stars. But don't just skip it, the author may be waiting for feedbacks.

  • Arai_Shiro
    Arai_Shiro2 years ago
    Posted

    So far, the story is pretty good. Author's writing style manages keep things fresh and the way of describing things makes it easier to understand things. The writing is from a 1st person perspective but it keeps things interesting and understandable. The way of conveying things makes it easy and stable to understand what the character is feeling and what would they feel in a possible situation, and thus it's easy to connect to the MC. A solid 4.6 for me

  • Arai_Shiro
    Arai_Shiro2 years ago
    Posted

    The story is pretty interesting, with things above the past self o the nature becoming a part of the 'new' nature. The pace looks good, not too slow nor too fast. Although it may seem like a classic 'World betrayed me! I will destroy it!' cliche at the start, it's not like that. The story happens in a 'Power-based' society and world. Thus, the main character is treated pretty poorly, even his life losing its importance in the eyes of others, well, mostly. But you see, life has a twisted taste, everything would eventually change. The story is interesting, the plot is good. Although we don't have that much information about world building, it looks good to. The world building has some confusing parts but I believe they will get clearer as the plot progresses. There are some typos here and there but it's nothing to worry about since they can be fixed and writing is thing that improves as you write. So please, don't just skip it saying the writing isn't that good.

  • Arai_Shiro
    Arai_Shiro2 years ago
    Commented

    I must say, plot is pretty interesting. With unknown abilities and existinces, it looks like it will be pretty interesting and a fun read. Although if I were to point out something, it would be the words being too direct at times, making it somewhat difficult to understand some parts.

  • Arai_Shiro
    Arai_Shiro2 years ago
    Posted

    Hello there, Author here. The story is about the life of Isaac, who has a seemingly normal life when looked from the outside. But inside of that ever-active mind, there were countless thing playing on. From possible scenarios to what would happen years later based on what he would do in the future. With some 'empty' or 'free' moments in between. Everything becoming normal, replacing their light with something a little less eye-catching. The act of acceptance and the act of wanting change fighting all day long, just to start again the next day. And one day, a typical 'One day', with a normal accident, everything would get messier. With Isaac delving into his mind, which was the foundation of everything. The need to understand and give meaning to oneself becoming even more present in his mind. Though, this change wouldn't just lead him to a road full of thinking about himself, but also make him aware of the hidden wonders of the world he was living in. Slowly but steadily changing the normal he knew of.

  • Arai_Shiro
    Arai_Shiro2 years ago
    Replied to WarStrider72

    'Demons' or 'My Demons' (I couldn't remember the exact name) by Imagine Dragons

  • Arai_Shiro
    Arai_Shiro2 years ago
    Replied to Mayline

    They're still in the same continent, just another country. Garlen has 3 big countries, which are Gorgon Empire, Griffon Kingdom and the Blood Desert. They're currently in Haug's travelling tavern which is currently located in the Gorgon Empire.

Imagine Breaching the 4th Wall

What could you do if you knew the world you live in was a fiction, but also your reality at the same time? Well, here comes the answer, 'Nothing', you could simply do nothing about it. Isaac was just a little child, being a little more mature than the others his age when he learned this somewhat confusing truth, forcing himself to lose his childish thinking just to be able to shoulder everything life was throwing at him. He eventually did, adapted to the changes and tried to live again, but at what cost? He was aware, more than what was comfortable, and this awareness brought the feeling of curiosity with it, filling his mind even without his will. Life lost the light it once held, replacing it with something more real than the childish light of eternal happiness. Everything, became 'normal', losing their shining lights which were their 'bests' that people could feel through them. The only silver linings was him at least being aware of things most of the people simply ignored without even knowing it or didn't even know, and the fact hat he had a thing that he could call a 'life', a life that held people who he cherished. Although everything became normal in his eyes, it would eventually change, like it happened to everything. With an accident that would create the beginning, which would then lead to the start. Trying to win against his existential crises while also trying to understand himself, this start would simply change the normal he knew of. ------------------------------------------------------------------------ Author's note here: I'm planning for the story be a long one, with chapters not being that much fast-paced. Long story short, you will need patience to see some satisfying contents, although not that far in the future. Oh, and do not expect a typical idiot main character who has 'plot armor' for everything.

Arai_Shiro · Fantasy
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