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luminous1_vanqu10

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I like One piece.I like carefree main characters with no plans for the future.....

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    luminous1_vanqu101mth
    Replied to Rexburn12

    maybe

    His mother left without saying anything.
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  • luminous1_vanqu10
    luminous1_vanqu101mth
    Replied to Silent_stiele

    don't worry just read it first and make some edits. I do that , I don't know how to detailly write fight scenes so a little AI helps.

    With renewed vigor, I pressed my attack, cutting through the remaining Marines with ferocity. The sound of clashing steel and cries of battle filled the air as I fought with all my might. Despite the odds stacked against me, I refused to yield, my determination unwavering.
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  • luminous1_vanqu10
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    Replied to Ballad

    but it's powerful too

    My initial instinct was to consume the fruit immediately, but I resisted the urge. I knew that if Doffy couldn't acquire the Goro Goro no Mi, this fruit could serve as a worthy substitute. Determined to choose wisely, I carefully returned the fruit to the chest and rose to make my way back to our ship, the potential of the devil fruit swirling in my mind.
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  • luminous1_vanqu10
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    I'm really excited for a story where the mc isn't the leader in the front but controls everything and keeps it in order.maybe someone will write a story about it too.so Anybody......

    If history were to go unaltered, I knew my brother would be denied by the Celestial Dragons, and the people around me would become the foundation of the future Donquixote family. Although I was not averse to the actions my brother took in the canon, except for a few, I knew they were weak—pitifully weak. At best, they could be called minor antagonists in a major arc. But with my intervention, I wanted to change all that. I aimed to subdue the world and crown my brother the King of the World. To achieve that, we needed power, fame, wealth, and, most importantly, strength to vanquish anyone who defied us. I also wanted to ensure that my brother didn't repeat the same mistakes in the world I only knew as fiction.
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  • luminous1_vanqu10
    luminous1_vanqu101mth
    Replied to TYR

    well it's his character that the author gavelet's give it a try

    "Doffy! Nooooooo!" Although I knew my brother would survive this ordeal from my past memory, I couldn't help but panic. Somehow, the love and affection of Doffy in my heart were the same as the ones I held for my brother Jonathan in my past life.
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  • luminous1_vanqu10
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    Replied to Ichigo_Kurosaki_1799

    just think the mc has a little personality similar to Homelander.he has problems and he is strong.and can grow stronger in the future

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  • luminous1_vanqu10
    luminous1_vanqu101mth
    Replied to Ichigo_Kurosaki_1799

    YES thank you. At last someone said it.I was planning to explain it in the coming chapter. can you add this 'man child part in a review for the story please it will be helpful

    Ch 17 Chapter 15
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    Replied to Johnny_James_2731
    "Let's put a smile on that face." Sebastian said in a creepy voice.
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  • luminous1_vanqu10
    luminous1_vanqu101mth
    Commented

    does Chinese Gus have a thing for long legs I noticed it in some other stories like the legendary mechanic and others .

    Like black stockings, it tightly wrapped her legs, making her figure even more graceful and her legs longer.
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    Replied to boyrcc

    what's the name of the movie

    2: The greater the power, the more unrestrained I become.
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    luminous1_vanqu101mth
    Replied to lord_tassha

    I'm planning on a mix universe of comics

    Ch 6 Chapter 6
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  • luminous1_vanqu10
    luminous1_vanqu101mth
    Replied to luminous1_vanqu10

    in the series he is in Gotham till 15 or 16

    "I don't have any cash. I usually carry it in my purse but I got robbed it's part of the reason why I was being chased by the thugs." Bruce replied making Sebastian curious.
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  • luminous1_vanqu10
    luminous1_vanqu101mth
    Replied to GreatKing05

    what when ? is it comics I don't really know...

    "I don't have any cash. I usually carry it in my purse but I got robbed it's part of the reason why I was being chased by the thugs." Bruce replied making Sebastian curious.
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  • luminous1_vanqu10
    luminous1_vanqu101mth
    Replied to Rigchel

    it's more like walking around freely other than in his mansion with guards and workers around

    "I just wanted to see the city alone and have some fresh air."
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  • luminous1_vanqu10
    luminous1_vanqu101mth
    Replied to Rigchel

    I know he is a kid just having fun

    'It was a nice experience, I still can't believe that Bruce got mugged by Selina'. He thought.
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  • luminous1_vanqu10
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    Commented
    ---[Insert an image of Batmobile]---
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  • luminous1_vanqu10
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    Replied to ArchProgenitor

    that's really a good idea I wish I thought about that....

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  • luminous1_vanqu10
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    Replied to Murod

    yes I'm trying to

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  • luminous1_vanqu10
    luminous1_vanqu101mth
    Replied to _Hori_

    well yes thor is more powerful than the canon version so why take time....

    Ch 15 Chapter 13
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  • luminous1_vanqu10
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    Replied to Hasan_Shopnil

    I will try to improve my English

    Ch 1 Chapter 1
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