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If You like Evil novel and not know about this community You should join now Dark novel community https://discord.gg/zQwjZjw4 Why There are some Evil protagonist novel here even some Author here

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  • 9529_Wuet
    9529_Wuet1yr
    Commented

    *scan

    Ch 40 Bruce's Bad Luck
    The way of the villain
    Fantasy · Choka
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  • 9529_Wuet
    9529_Wuet1yr
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    Maybe when you are verifying you should enter privacy and safety in discord and choosing do not scam

    Ch 40 Bruce's Bad Luck
    The way of the villain
    Fantasy · Choka
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  • 9529_Wuet
    9529_Wuet1yr
    Commented

    Thank for the chapters

    Ch 40 Bruce's Bad Luck
    The way of the villain
    Fantasy · Choka
    detail
  • 9529_Wuet
    9529_Wuet1yr
    Commented

    Hello, sorry to disturb the time, is there a problem when you try to enter the dark novel community or you really don't intend to re-enter?

    Ch 40 Bruce's Bad Luck
    The way of the villain
    Fantasy · Choka
    detail
  • 9529_Wuet
    9529_Wuet1yr
    Commented

    Good 👍

    Ch 38 Unknown Fate
    The way of the villain
    Fantasy · Choka
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  • 9529_Wuet
    9529_Wuet1yr
    Commented

    Thank you for the chapters

    Ch 28 Real Trouble Brewing
    The way of the villain
    Fantasy · Choka
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  • 9529_Wuet
    9529_Wuet1yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter

    Ch 18 A Small Conversation
    The way of the villain
    Fantasy · Choka
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  • 9529_Wuet
    9529_Wuet1yr
    Commented

    Of course no author because I don't read stories like that very often I usually only read evil genre novels that don't have romance or harem

    Ch 17 Fight Breaks out
    The way of the villain
    Fantasy · Choka
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  • 9529_Wuet
    9529_Wuet1yr
    Commented

    That bad

    Ch 17 Fight Breaks out
    The way of the villain
    Fantasy · Choka
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  • 9529_Wuet
    9529_Wuet1yr
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    Hello writer As you requested I will give feedback about this novel and give criticism that might help the writer My first reaction when I saw this novel was I'm happy because someone else is making a novel with a villain theme without romance or Harem on a webnovel But after reading the first chapters there are some feelings of disappointment that I have in this novel The main problem this novel has is bad grammar mistakes No need to go too far. In the first chapter I just read I saw a lot of misspellings and errors with a lot of grammatical errors Some examples I saw 1. That's out if the question then (that's of not if ) 2. Instead go back home ( so he went back to his house ) that's all from me sorry if there are mistakes and thank you to the author for spending his time to make a Villain novel And I hope the author learns more English and last suggestions for writers, try to practice writing more often, hope it helps

    Ch 17 Fight Breaks out
    The way of the villain
    Fantasy · Choka
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