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MidnightEgg

MidnightEgg

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An Author exploring their own ways.

2021-06-15 JoinedNorway
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  • MidnightEgg
    MidnightEgg1yr
    Commented

    That's the end of volume 1, and we'll finally get a true peak beyond the door. And again many thanks to the people who have picked this up, you are all truly wonderful.

    Ch 14 Beyond
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  • MidnightEgg
    MidnightEgg1yr
    Commented

    A big thanks to anyone who reads comment or share, you are all truly wonderful.

    Ch 4 Within pages
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  • MidnightEgg
    MidnightEgg1yr
    Commented

    There is plenty more in store ^-^

    Ch 3 The Town
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  • MidnightEgg
    MidnightEgg1yr
    Commented

    I hope that all of you will continue enjoying my story, do feel free to share it around with anyone that you think will be interested.

    Ch 1 The Forest
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  • MidnightEgg
    MidnightEgg2yr
    Posted

    The update schedule is tight, the characters got charm, and the writer got his tongue-and-cheek humor conveyed as he tells his tale. I've read some of the author's previous works and he's come quite far on improving both writing quality and language, whilst he's still not perfected his use of the English language I would assume most readers wouldn't find much fault if any (No problems which detract from story quality). The story takes its time, but it never grinds to a halt, if you're looking for a fun yet perverted story I'd advise you to pick this one up and give it a go.

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    Reincarnated With A Badluck System
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  • MidnightEgg
    MidnightEgg2yr
    Commented

    Sheesh, just how small is her husband lol

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  • MidnightEgg
    MidnightEgg2yr
    Commented

    Laximus XD, what a lad.

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  • MidnightEgg
    MidnightEgg2yr
    Commented

    you will have to see the god of death himself.

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  • MidnightEgg
    MidnightEgg2yr
    Commented

    how you lived your lives

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  • MidnightEgg
    MidnightEgg2yr
    Commented

    Good luck mate.

    Ch 1 Vincent's Death
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  • MidnightEgg
    MidnightEgg2yr
    Commented

    would advise finding a synonym to replace suction. But so far I see wast improvements in your ability as a writer. Keep it up.

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  • MidnightEgg
    MidnightEgg2yr
    Commented

    XD

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  • MidnightEgg
    MidnightEgg2yr
    Replied to FireEngine

    Well, they are quite important, but we're lacking a fair bit of context as to why that is.

    Ch 14 Beyond
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  • MidnightEgg
    MidnightEgg2yr
    Posted

    The story takes its time and isn't the standard action fantasy you might find, whilst the writing itself is subpar to the tale it tells of I would advise people to give this one a shot if they got time.

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    Forged to kill
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  • MidnightEgg
    MidnightEgg2yr
    Commented

    She could see how nervous her husband was.

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  • MidnightEgg
    MidnightEgg2yr
    Commented

    Just looked like one single piece of metal (The extra just is unnessecary and breaks the flow of the sentence)

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  • MidnightEgg
    MidnightEgg2yr
    Posted

    The characters got personality, and the story is both humorous and interesting showing the development of an undead that is recovering its sentience. The writing is nice and smooth barring a few small hickups but other than that it's quite nice. If you want to read about an undead's adventures pick this one up.

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    Bro, I'm not an Undead!
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  • MidnightEgg
    MidnightEgg2yr
    Commented

    Nice start for our protagonist, Skullius the bony boi.

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    Bro, I'm not an Undead!
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  • MidnightEgg
    MidnightEgg2yr
    Commented

    Use the word demoted when speaking about a downgrade.

    I stealthily absorbed their mana, feeling a chilling sensation in my bones as I did so before leaving just enough juice to keep them from being promoted to regular stones.
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    Bro, I'm not an Undead!
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  • MidnightEgg
    MidnightEgg2yr
    Commented

    You can remove the "a"

    Then there was a silence.
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    Bro, I'm not an Undead!
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