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Joy_Nevai2yrCommentedCh 27 Chapter 26- Joy_Nevai2yrCommented
You can make a nice poet😍
The full text had been in the poetic language of the Air Guardians. Miran remembered only bits but it had sounded something like, Air was light and always in motion. Those who were affiliated to it had to be free of the heavy weights that would keep them grounded. The lighter one was, the higher they would fly. - Joy_Nevai2yrPosted
The novel has a very enticing story development. The author makes things even better by writing in a way that makes it easy for you as a reader to form an image and follow the story line. So far, it seems that all the characters are being given equal opportunities to develop though Mirian and Reyna have more( They are the main it seems so no complaint). Updates seem fairly stable which is even better. Finally, the typos are few as expected since the author is human but I appreciate them taking time to correct any that may be pointed out.Good work so far[img=recommend]
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*last sentence repetition
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how you were able to right it sounding so rightly formal is beyond me😍
"Thank you for the flattering words Councilor Sophia but I will not be judging today. I invited the heir today to give him a chance to rule over this matter. If his judgement is sound then I decree that it be taken with the same weight as it would be coming from me. Are there any objections to this?" - Joy_Nevai2yrCommented
* if i understood the cancelling of powers then i think the word not is missing😁
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This is strangely touching🥺
"She doesn't ever let herself appear weak and her pride is the only thing she knows. The Matriarch never tells Miran not to go but I always see how her arm remains raised every time. Hoping maybe to hold on to him by just her will but he never turns back. He never sees the tears in my lady's eyes with each step he takes away from her." - Joy_Nevai2yrCommented
Gives me Parabatai vibes🙃
The battle was a dance, beautiful as it was deadly. The two boys seemed to guess each other's moves and reacted just in time. In that moment they were the only two people in the realm, nothing else mattered. They were tied, none was better than the other and it was as if they didn't even care. Back and forth they went until one of them finally decided to surrender. - Joy_Nevai2yrCommentedCh 18 Chapter 17
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*first line has an issue
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ironic much😂😂😂
The spirit next to Miran, sat in a rigid posture and stared off into a distant place. The Sage's presence in the room prevented Reyna from asking her the questions that burned inside her. For some complicated reason only Miran and herself could see the spirit. Having met one of them, Reyna was familiar with their ethereal beauty and overpowering aura but unlike Izzy, the Light spirit was cold in comparison. She wore a beautiful dark dress that would have made Izzy cringe at first glance. - Joy_Nevai2yrCommentedCh 17 Chapter 16
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I wish the boy had lived...He'd be my bias😭😭😭
Not even a ghost of his beauty remained. His silver hair was matted onto his forehead, his cheeks creating dark hollows in his face. His skin was an ashen gray that seemed to darken in front of her eyes. She had cried then, for the boy that had been and the body that was left. He had been brave enough to resist but only for so long. She finally understood what it meant to be a hero and the boy was it. - Joy_Nevai2yrCommented
Wen Ke Xing 😂😂😂
In the end only one of them remained, he was on his knees with his back still straight. Even as the lashes became deeper he didn't give out under the force of the whips. Reyna's eyes shifted to the rest of him wanting to escape the gory sight of the torn flesh that was his bloody back. The boy's hair was a brilliant silver and in the moonlight it seemed to be made of pure metal. - Joy_Nevai2yrCommented
Wen Ke Xing 😂😂😂
In the end only one of them remained, he was on his knees with his back still straight. Even as the lashes became deeper he didn't give out under the force of the whips. Reyna's eyes shifted to the rest of him wanting to escape the gory sight of the torn flesh that was his bloody back. The boy's hair was a brilliant silver and in the moonlight it seemed to be made of pure metal. - Joy_Nevai2yrCommentedCh 15 Chapter 14
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Egotistic and self absorbed much 🥱
Reyna's mother had proven to be the most useful piece he played with so far, she had spared him the trouble and had summoned the spirit to her aid. He didn't know how she had accomplished such a fit and for the love of himself, he didn't care. - Joy_Nevai2yrCommented
This madee laugh so hard😂😂😂like imagining it in my head....looks like a Karen
" Nice try young lady but not even a winged demon can save you from the dentist. You let your teeth get rotten by yourself, so say goodbye to Mister angel before we are late."