Firstly I liked the story. The narration was on point and the surrounding of the character were very well described. I felt satisfied with reading it.

this story so far is so good that I wanted to read it till the end continuously. The male lead is portrayed so beautifully and the female leads personality is a killer. most beautifully written.

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your story looks really promising and the way have built the story of the characters are too good. enjoyed reading it.

your story is amazing, and the way you play around with metaphorical references to compare the behaviour or the condition and feelings of the character is very smooth and connects very well throughout the story so far. The story 8s really wholesome. loved it

This story have kept me hooked onto it and I really liked the way all the characters are portrayed. Also few moments between the main protagonists are really good. In love with this story