Hopebestman

I couldnt find actress in that name but i found character. Janis Wilson actress. The age and everything fits. I think you ment her.

*Barzini not Basini. In this chapter its all Basini written.

she cant say "too" because she didnt hear taylor's request. So it should be "i want to have a set" or "i want to have the whole set" or something. That "too" indicates that someone asked and she is "also" asking but she doesnt know someone asked.

*Brithish

not sarah, matilda.

This chapter was much better than expected. For a while story was the same. Nothing new but this 2 chapters showed me that, i can still find nee things.

what did they do to 5 cents? bought a cola?

i think its a mistake. it should be the opposite.

Its a mistake a guess. In this example %10 should goes to actors not the company.

I am indeed now. it will be comma not dot and after "stars" it will be dot not comma