Melusi_Moyo

you are shit ur novel is shit too i opened patreon its not worth the money ..........................................................................................................................................................

i love it master aproval

very goo author keep it up hope for more stories...........................................................................................................and hope you can set up a patreon or kofi

another clifff

what the hell is wrong with the author could have done so much more with this story i bet i would wright a better one in me sleep...............................

thank you very much will improve with your suggestions

yeah, I agree am working on that as well will be posted soon