Daoist_Cain
“At the center of your being you have the answer; you know who you are and you know what you want.” -Lao Tzu
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I have seen all your comments in my fics, TBH when I was writing this fic I did not proofread it I just went along with what's on my mind atm. as for some of your complaints of trash grammar like I said I didn't proofread it I wrote along and update as soon as I think its enough. For the trash updating, I think I stated that this fic was just for me and to take my mind off when there are no uploads on the site I am reading or when I have nothing to read. As for the issues of trash progression I have no idea how you can see anything progress in 2 chapters but if you are capable of seeing it then I applaud you. And for the final issues that trash character design if I remember I haven't even introduced the main character in chapter 2 I only gave names and such. unless you have a future sight I have to give it to you I am beyond confused about where you are getting this info but since I have time I mind as well reply. I would like to think that you had a bad day and you just skim through my fic and decide to review it like an ancient human who just saw the first fire and decide to jump up and down but you don't have to worry I won't take down your review to set an entertainment for those who like to see clowns. hope you had a great day tomorrow.
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i dont want to spoil so i wont tell it will be explain later. man its kinda fcked up to steal someones girl poor glenn been givin too many green hat with all those other fics.
I like your mindset! Wiseman. respeckt
honestly I was originally just going to skip 7 days until the system wakes up and not even bother about rick but since you point it out ill make something up. do you have any suggestions?
I think you are mistaken he didn't turn but got murdered by the other inmate that is if you're talking about big Tiny the big guy.
I like your explanation more than mine might use this concept thanks.
I watched the show and Negan was bitten through a cloth and his skin turn red but didn't turn and some people got the blood of a walker in their mouths for example people in Alexandria drank water with blood and walker guts in them and only got a fever so I think that a scratch will not turn them drinking the blood won't turn them but when the blood is gotten in the wound it will turn them, for example, the incident on a hilltop where all the people in Negan's crew have to soak their weapons and bullets with walker blood which later in the day people turn because it made blood to blood contact which gave them fever and turns.
not nessecery true, with all the cast of the canon going through all those zombie they must have been scratch before so I doubt that a scratch can turn people. but for bites its at least 99 percent sure to turn you the a walker unless it is bitten to a part where it can be amputated. as for the 1 percent it is for the chance for anyone having immune to the virus.
hey finally someone recognize the OC picture reference. sighh... I been waiting for this comment.
for durability, the stats didn't show it yet because the mc has not been damaged to the extent that it needs to be shown. this is due to the system's "weakness" and the system must preserve its power like a cellphone getting put in a battery-saving mode it will be explained later on when the system is awake and why the system was in this state. as for Wisdom, it can't really be measured however smart (intelligent) you are it doesn't matter because sometimes smart people can get a simple question wrong so. and as for dexterity, I think it comes along with agility, why? well ask you what is dexterity no need to answer ill tell you it is the skills in performing tasks, especially with the hands and I think if you are agile enough you could perform tasks with skills. how about senses? well, it's kind of hit or miss because the sense I had in mind was for the mc to sense things within the limit in his storage space (reference ch 9-10) like in the latest chapter which I'm still exploring atm. as for the constitution, he is not bound to "bottleneck" he can upgrade with points where it will be explained later after the system is awake to how and where to get them. as for etc? I don't know can you clarify? I was originally going to explain this little by little but since it is rare to get questioned by an alien reader I couldn't help but reply so here is the answer I hope it answers at least some of your question.
lol I know but I have this story in my head and I can not unwrite it off my head.
in my defense Knox's defense he rescues Morgan and his family first.