isolated_nerd1606

Love to author. Although you may feel the novel is going nowhere, but the novel was very good, as long as it lasted ( specially because I am such a sucker for Football web novels). Best of luck for your future endeavors and future novels.

There is very great start. Come on Author, develop on the core.

Please continue to update. Would be looking forward to it.

Please continue to update. Looking forward to it.

You have a very nice core for the story , author . Just hold on to it . It has a very nice development . Maybe the only thing holding the story back is over complication of character and repeated use of names . At the same time , So many new names have been introduced that the main character and important supporting characters are being overshadowed . Else , its all good and will be watching over the progression of story.