my ideas jump too much, from a draft to another draft. but it will be come. originally i wanted to publish 10 ch first and then do it weekly, but maybe i change that and start weekly from the beginning

realllllyyyyyyyyy interesting! i will consider it seriously.

MANY TNX. actually your idea aligns with mine in many aspects. Submissive MC, Single wife, netorase. about dominant wife, it would be a bit difficult. unless i make her dominant to her husband and submissive to her partners? then again, one of the problems of previous one was the couple being OP. but if they weren't, many opportunity to abuse them would show in the story making it TOO unrealistic. its a dilemma, i can bring a system or power to balance this but that would be OP too. so another way is bring another Mc in the story, not love rival of sort but like these s*x gods we see in dual cultivating novel? I'm currently writing the story with mentioned features but its still a draft and i want something clean so i appreciate everybody's comment and consider them seriously.

so netorase? because netorare require some betrayal and MC(the one who is NTRed) having a harem will make the flow more natural as more girls of him will fall into hands of the other MC. hmm, I am more inclined toward the "single wife" though. it makes more impact but harem has its charm so ...... i am waiting.

tnx for the idea. actually these kinds of plot is very exhausted by VNs. I mean many erogames adopt this one and focus on netorare. while its good it has many restrictions, it will be nice story for a short novel but for prolonged ones its not enough. but from other mc(?)'s point of view i consider it, not exactly but aspects of it would be apparent.

the first few chapters are mess in term of editing and I didn't turn back. ....Sorry:(

at the end of the last arc, I hinted at something. decades, at most a century.

Tnx for comments. I like GB novels but the current one would be NTR, maybe in some future works? hope u enjoy :)

yeah. I think all of the reverse harem genre is like this. but this story FMC only love the MC at heart and she doesn't deny him (at least until now, probably until the end) yet she cuck him with her body.

Nah. I'm not offended, your comment was just a bit confusing for me. but I got your point. pure love as in Vannila? no. will they love each other despite all of this? in my story outline of this arc and the next yes, as for other arcs I didn't planned any. mc would be cucked, it's the essence of the story but their relationship remains. some stories out there are outright p*rn, I wanted to write a story with a semblance of plotline. Thanks for your thoughts. P.S. reverse harem is gonna be there more or less. but non will compete with Dan for first place. (at least until we reach the third arc which I didn't think about yet.)

I explained a bit further ahead, but here is another short explaination: for meditation techniques there are levels and for bloodline there are level of awakening (some sort of maturity) . the former will be found by sort of enlightment while the latter have change in colours and enlightment regarding one's ability. as for tails I don't intend to involve them yet but they would be present in near future. how many levels? depending on technique or bloodline. sometimes its easy to know from the name of technique or bloodline.

Tnx for ur comment and rec. :X I think that is possible. for now i made many knots waiting to be solved so that kind of thing would wait for the end of this arc. at that point I will ask readers about the direction of the story. dark? wholesome? fetish-based? or something between, like reverse harem? well i have an outline for the story but many thing can change. we have enought time to think about it.

I want to keep it within frame of reason (at least i try). adding too much of anything will ruin the potential and the story would be 'fragile' in my opinion. So corruption and some heavy kinks would be on hold until I decide. maybe when the story is lacking in these areas. Thanks for your comment.

agreed. but MC is an amateur in the arts of battle. so spear ,being simple weapon, would be more realistic .

I'm trying to post at least a chapter for now.

well, i appreciate your recommendation. the women in the harem will be have much less scenes than men. (I want FMC to be symbol of lust. so some of the setting is inevitable. but i will put more energy to males than females....) Hope you enjoy it :X