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I just looked up on a pokedex, it apparently says that Horsea learn Bubble Beam when they reach the level of 25.
Cuz its a bit unnatural. I prefer when the MC doesn't get op pokemon in like 3 chapters. Wouldn't a Horsea normally have only 2-4 moves when they are caught?
Pretty sure its Greek?
A bit too much I think? Perhaps take out the Bubble beam and maybe twister?
While I think this has potential to become a great story, the main character is kind of chillaxed about losing his parents. If I was in his position I would be sobbing my eyes out. Looker's character is also kinda weird? I mean, what normal person would go to a child and say "deal with it" after they lost their parents?
Isn't it Misty Waterflower?