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DHsK1mthCommenteddying to save some cash đ¤Ł
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Ah yes. And i play the English too much.
Issei rolled his eyes. "You play the internet too much." - DHsK11mthReplied to Lucy_Carla
After all there are kinks to iron out
Or maybe Shining Gate would be better? - DHsK11mthReplied to Embraced
where do i sign up?
Although that thing is only 1 billion, Money is still Money, no matter how little it is. - DHsK11mthReplied to Elder
At this point (and even long after in cannon), she believes that the sins she committed as the russian spy black widow haven't been made up by her. So she feels inadequate (morally) and guilty in front of people she believes are fighting the good fight (for the good of humanity)
Looking at the backs of Phil Coulson and May, Natasha Romanoff smiled bitterly in her heart and thought "A soldier who was born in the dark and died in Chaos? Am I not the same? But I'm not as great as them." - DHsK1yrCommented
I imagine that for any naruto fanfic, B is one of (if not the) hardest characters to write...
So now, ya better tell me, what you doing here?!" - DHsK1yrReplied to The_Invisible_Man
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'You make so much sense that I am speechless.' - DHsK1yrPosted
At first, this story was somewhat fine. It had a somewhat ok character background (although cliche) and pretty acceptable story development, with the main character not afraid to use his powers. The character, though, still seems somewhat 2D with his entire list of character traits being "1. indifferent" and "2. Hypocrite". But I don't really have a problem with either of the two, since let's face it, every human and fictional character is a hypocrite. But later, when he accepts his family everything starts to go downhill. He completely changes his entire character to one of the shitty harem protagonists. He isn't as dense as them, but he still acts like that aggravating character getting led around the nose by everybody, waking up while being sexually assaulted and generally acting like he has no say, control or power (especially after the first 60 chapters of establishing just how much control and power he has). Though, one thing that's great that remains constant is the writing quality. It remains pretty great throughout. Kudos to the author for that.
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he destroyed every country and it's government in the entire world and still cares about plot..
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but he also has superhuman strength and abilities. he should be able to cut and chop wood faster using his hands than he would be able to with mordern tools, thus the time he needs to collect materials would also be much lesser.
That was not an issue for Wei Huo who had all the time in the world. He spent the next two decades collecting various materials for the ship. - DHsK2yrCommented
This made me cry.
Pickup Line: You don't even have to say "Lumos Maxima" to turn me on. - DHsK2yrCommented
Just a small editing suggestion, 'The thing he least lacked' or 'the last thing he lacked.'
The thing he had found in Kirigakure's unnamed scroll was already proven that as long as you provide enough Natural Energy to barren land, it can be turned into a jungle. And the least thing Shiroken lacked was Natural Energy. - DHsK2yrCommented
ahhhhh... I'm being blinded by the extreme quantity of your generosity
I'm very generous. - DHsK2yrCommented
red-eyed sword monster... REALLY? red-eyed sword monster... I MEAN, SERIOUSLY? red-eyed sword monster...
He agreed and sent us to complete many missions, it's been 4 months since we started going on mission and now every village know us as the *3-curses* we were regarded as this generation's 3 legendary sanins. Even as individuals we 3 were famous as *Red-eyed sword monster*, *Golden flash of Konoha* and *Illusionist of Konoha*. - DHsK2yrCommented
that is one long sentence
After she said that I created a king size bed then I slowly went near her and embrace her and carried her like a princess and placed on the bed then I held her chin and gave her a kiss on her rosy lips slowly giving her a deep French kiss for 5 minutes and separate our lips to breathe. - DHsK2yrPosted
The different ideologies explained in this book are quite fascinating. I have read many Naruto fanfics before but none of them have made me think about the entire shinobi world in this way. It has exactly the right amount of action, world building, fluff and everything else to make it into a true masterpiece.
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