(Reviewed at ch 31) Story seems great so far, +Mc is smart and overpowered. +Author did not choose to copy abilities from anime. +Story is not a harem, (regardless of what you might prefer majority of reincarnated stories in webnovel are harem and majority are sh*t). +Character feel different from each other and different personalities but mc needs to have more interaction with others. -Not much is shown about the strength of Mc's superiors so we don't know what level he is at, he seems too overpowered at the moment which could ruin the story. -Mc relies a lot on things being as they were in the original Story despite being aware of the differences. -World building needs a bit more detail. Pace seems good I do hope the story has romance sooner rather than later. Great read overall ,binged read the available chapters and waiting for more!

And he is using kizaru's devilfruit as a flash light, there's no level 1 or level 100 in devilfruit just creative ways of using it

Bruh, Wth did i strat reading should have read the summary 😂😂😂😂 Well bye gonna go read something else🤣🤣🤣

What's 'mtwabv'? Cheat code to spawn a tank or something?😂

No, it doesn't track reading hours if you're not using the app

Whenever i read homura ,i imagine homura doing those things 🤣

Ofcourse the villain is called lucius.its always him[img=recommend]

If it's that easy to gain powers from people, why not study captain America and bruce banner and logan and become a gene god who can wipe out the universe along with this fanfic's future with a wink😉

Make it a hammer instead of an axe 🤣

Just gained the crew's respect? They would either call him a devil or god. You made it seem like people throwing out Suns is a rare thing but not so rare. Maybe a bit more detail on their expressions would fix it

Abilities were increased too fast, what was the point of introducing level 2 when he'd reach level 3 just after getting beat up.

Still he's basically recruiting scum of East blue, that's lowest of the low. There's a limit how 'canon fodder' your cannon fodder can be. Besides he cant be everywhere to keep check on them these are raiders and pillagers and they'll be using his name to do it.

The summary is in English

Thankyou ,for not giving him a sharingan[img=recommend]

From what I've read its in narrator's pov that's why it feels like a journal. The problem is in sentence structure like "if both of them attacked at the same time it would have created trouble for themselves, but they did not attack at the same time so it did not create trouble for themselves" Also uses names a lot instead of he/she.

Just search 'pokemon jordino fanfiction' on google. It has 37 chaps total but they are much larger than these, read from ch33 on fanfiction after this chapter

That's not how black hole works, you could imitate a black hole by creating a black ball with a strong pull, but not an actual black hole. To create it you would need enough mass to make it collapse in onitself and its impossible for even the entire planet to have that much mana

The plan:"Well i was thinking of making iron beams to block out the door and you defeat them" 🤦 Sorry gonna drop here

"And i was the top scorer in all of them" ??? Who is mc? What's his quirk? Why was his score infinity as well?